February 27th, 2010 at 05:37pm
The Complex Kids. - Comments
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i really, really love this story. the way you've created your own 'world within a world' as you put it. i'm gonna subscribe and i really, really hope you update this<3June 25th, 2008 at 01:32am
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Will there ever be more... ?March 10th, 2008 at 09:16am
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wow....
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
I READ THE PREQUEL ONE TIME BUT THEN I COULDN'T FIND IT AGAIN!!!
BUT I FOUND IT AND I'M SO HAPPY!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY TO!!!
MORE PLEASE!!!
February 9th, 2008 at 03:44am -
i love the 'don't leave her with people i fuck' part
and the nun bit made me giggle
tbh- i just loved it
you're writing makes me want to read on
you're talented xxJanuary 31st, 2008 at 08:18pm -
I don't think I've ever seen another one of these on here. Of course, it's possible. But if I have, then they weren't very memorable. I read this last night and came on here this evening to comment on it. Because I couldn't think of anything to write then; I thought about it all day and still can't now. It's just....such a good idea.
Favourite lines: The Butcher was protective and Liz had anger issues.
Gabe turned to Ryan. “And no, you cannot.”
^-- Love the humor. Its kind of twisted.December 30th, 2007 at 06:32am -
i like this
alot please write moreDecember 18th, 2007 at 09:04am -
I like this : ) It's very different from the usual stories I read and I love that fact.December 1st, 2007 at 07:57am
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I would have to say this is my favorite story EVER! I love it a lot! Gabe and Dru are so cute together.December 1st, 2007 at 05:05am
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Thank you.<3November 28th, 2007 at 05:17am
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This is going to be really good, I can already tell.
I adore the idea, and its pretty much win.November 28th, 2007 at 04:58am -
Double post, sorry.November 27th, 2007 at 09:19am
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I like how kind Gabe was to Dru, calling her baby girl and being so good to her.
My favorite lines:
Needless to say, she wasn't exactly within Vatican favor.
"Don't leave her with people I fuck."
Gabe turned to Ryan. “And no, you cannot.”
“But—“
“No. I’m not giving you drugs. And if I find out you took anything stronger than pot from Will, I’m beating the shit out of you.”
Apparently she’d done a drug he didn’t approve of and he had done someone she didn’t like. It happened once or twice a week. The Butcher was protective and Liz had anger issues.November 27th, 2007 at 09:19am -
Sequel to Breakdown Alley: The Beginning of Nothing.
Part One.
Over 2200 words.
Basically following the same storyline.
I'm debating throwing in this thing with cops harassing Dru to find a missing girl, but I haven't decided yet.
Happy reading!
xoxox
-DruNovember 27th, 2007 at 08:03am
He stuttered slightly when he read and he finally snapped the book shut, flushing with embarrassment.
Ryan kissed him softly on the cheek. “It’s okay. I think it’s cute.”
Brendon didn’t say anything, but he threw himself down on their pillow. Ryan lay down beside him, gently stroking his boyfriend’s hair. “It’s okay. We all have something we can’t do.”
“My dad said I was retarded.” Brendon said in a small voice.
“Well, that’s stupid. You knew every word you read. I didn’t even know that one word. ‘Fluid’, I think. I thought it was ‘flued’.” Ryan wrapped his arms around Brendon’s waist. “I love you.”
“I love you, too.” the younger boy replied, sniffling.
and,
Gabe turned to Ryan. “And no, you cannot.”
“But—“
“No. I’m not giving you drugs. And if I find out you took anything stronger than pot from Will, I’m beating the shit out of you.”
Amazing story. <3