Your Bedsheets - Comments

Extremely interesting take, with the point of view and everything. I really really love this one-shot. It's definitely one of the best ones out there, and I'm not kidding. Your writing style fit beautifully with the idea and plot; I felt like I was actually feeling the warmth and the hurt of that girl. Amazing job <3

i really liked it :) interesting :)

I didn't realize it was written in the point of view of the bedsheets until like... the third or fourth paragraph. Then.. when it clicked I was like "Ohhhh" and I finished it. I thought it was good, but it was a little odd.