I'm Tthe Beast? - Comments

five: This part is also extremely hilarious I glared at him, “You must be out of your mind. Why would you want Gigantor there as your eyes? He’ll eat you!”

Blind Guy gave another sigh, “He won’t eat me. He prefers the taste of annoying woman better, especially if they have a side of selfishness.”

I gave a relived sigh myself, “Well, then I guess it’s a good thing there’s no one here like that.” The descriptions for this chapter was excellent and although this is the last time for the contest, I will totally be commenting to the other chapters. Can't wait to read and see what happens next.

four: The descriptions for this chapter were great. I thought the last part was cute and hilarious. Might want to put the contest link somewhere in the summary though for the contest "Because fairy tales are amazing". Can't wait to read the fifth and last chapter (at least for the contest it is).

three: the layout and banner are very simple which is a good thing because the reader doesn't have a hard time reading it. The descriptions are great and I loved the one ofherdescribing herself as middle class. So far, I'm liking this more and more.

two: mediocrity at first seemed a little off to me but it's probably because I've never actually seen it spelled so ignore ALL of this. I thought that the crash and thunderstorm scene was very well described; so much in fact that it felt like it could pull the reader in and make them the main character. The descriptions are picking up and seeming to actually give life to the story as if it wanted out of the computer. So unto the next chapter...

Judging time writer. So this is actually my first beauty&beast story and I see that you went in and fixed that mrs/ms thing. Descriptions were decent (but hey it's the first chapter) but the plot sounds amazing; a role reverse where the girl gets to be the beast is deff original. Hoping you went it and fixed any of the other punctuation in the rest of the story. So unto the next chapter...

wow, poor girl. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Yay! Update! I'm eagerly awaiting more.

I love Beauty and the Beast stories and I'm interested to see in how the role switching will progress. ^__^

Hello There! I saw your comment and decided to take a look around! I decided on this one first, and may I say that you are quite the author? I mean, there are a few minimal mistakes, but your overall plot and wording are great! You are very original, and you give the reader a clear mental picture. I would be happy to edit this for you if you like, but there really aren't that many mistakes. The only one I saw (or I'm pretty sure it was a mistake, anyways), is that one of the assistants called her "Mrs. Leon". It doesn't seem that your character is married, but it could just be part of the plot. I really couldn't tell, but yeah! Anyways! I am definitely subscribing to this one! I offer my sympathy for your family. I know that any death hits hard, but keep your head up!

Okay, first of all, I did not see that coming. A model. A model? Wow. I really didn't see that coming.
Second of all, I loved the humor placed into this even if it was obvious, such as in this scene:

“He won’t eat me. He prefers the taste of annoying woman better, especially if they have a side of selfishness.”
I gave a relived sigh myself, “Well, then I guess it’s a good thing there’s no one here like that.”

I also loved the part when Rhoselyn (?) says I’m totally suing his ass. It made me smile.

It's too bad it's not finished because I want to see what happens next. However, take your time on this, but first of all make sure you are okay; I know what it's like to lose someone in the family.

Anyways, good job, finished or not! It was funny to read and so I shall be awaiting an update.

hahaha that's funny. I can't wait for the next one.

A blind driver.... Well, doesn't that just add the cherry to her cake? I love it, and can't wait for more.

=) hehe she just had to run into someone with no sight didn't she.

I love the update. It's awesome that she doesn't want to look... *gasps* middle class! *shudders* I'm from the low class myself and wouldn't mind the middle class look myself, but that just adds to her opinion on life, and this one is going great! I love it!

I just thought that I'd read this one because of the lack of comments. Needless to say, I don't know why there aren't any comments. The punctuation needs work, but other than that you've got a great story brewing here. Can't wait to read more. *subscribes*