Hitting the Road - Comments

The beginning really pulled me in, but the middle part sort of bored me. The ending was really good, though, and picked it all back up. The yellow layout tthough, bleh. Your description was amazing. :)

Wow, this was wonderful! I loved everything about it - especially the ending. It was almost like a resolution of everything that has gone on in her life. This made my night (:
Lovely job! <3

this made my day ^^

Which means, I really like it.

I liked this. It was sweet the way the two get along. I loved their little banter at the end. XP

Your style has changed a lot since you've come back, for the better I think.

Great story!