A Single Moment of Sincerity - Comments

Your stories are always just.... Overwhelming :)
That was amazing.
Good luck!!

That was amazing.

Oh my freaking god, that was so sad.
I teared up reading it.
I adored how you used the prompt. I loves me my tragedies.
The first scene with Trace and Davon by the lake was so beautiful.
The words you chose for that scene were just perfect.
The second scene was simply heartbreaking.
I love the contrast you made between the "then" and the "now"
It really illustrated how everything had changed
And the final line in the story was genius.
Your spelling was superb and your grammar was fairly good - just a few verb tense mistakes here and there, but nothing major.
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I love this, as I told you before. I normally hate tragedies with a passion, but I don't hate this one as much. Amazing entry xD