I feel its a little bit of a slow start... maybe I think that because I read the old version first... anyway I can't wait to really get into the plot of this one
It's always good to rewrite your stories. It let's you add depth and shows you where you could change things to make the story better. I would love to reread it once you get back to this point in the story. I think it has a great plotline and serious potential. Good luck to you!
Very cool. You added enough drama in this to keep me going. I, myself, have no ideas coming to me on what else I want to happen, but you should keep writing, it's good :)
I think.... I don't know what to think but I do love this story and he overreacted and now is making it seem like he doesn't like her in the slightest :/
I just started reading this and I like it. I thought I would give you some feedback, regardless of whether you're still writing. I love stories with convoluted plots and chapters that are very simplistic. It's a juxtaposition that tends to work very well, yet in this story it seems kind of confusing and a little rushed. I would suggest that you take your time with it. I like the idea a lot though! So if you have dropped it then I hope that you'll pick it back up and give it some TLC. -Eli
Ok now I read all your stories and dude I think this is my fav LOVE IT!!! and I'm tema cayden because of the past and him opening up to her and because I think will is the unknown person :) plz update soon
NOT WILL! He's the bad guy.....I like Cayden, because I think that the other guy is Cayden....because she remembered his eyes...yea that's my theory.. UPDATE UPDAT UPDATE!!!
btw I think that Unknown P.o.v. was Will because he met her and he seemed taken back when she said she remembered something and the unknown guy said there was a set back.....
Hi! i just started reading this! Its really good! I think that guy was her (now) ex. I don't think he's looking for her, because he said he'll see her in this future with another guy and that would take awhile for her to get over her ex since she loved him. I think Jared is a brother or a son, but I'm hoping he's a brother since she's kinda young for a son... Right now I'd say I'm team Cayden, but I need to get to know his character better. btw you know that name would be the same name from the guy on your story with 42 chapters except with a different first letter. thats kinda cheating! lol I don't care, it doesn't matter anyway! Xp update soon please!