Our Time Is Fleeting, So We Take Control - Comments

loved this story! It was really amazingly good. :D
gna read the sequel now

loved this story! It was really amazingly good. :D
gna read the sequel now

Oh my God, i didnt have internet for like a week and you guys completed the story and started a sequel? Wow. Damn i hate places with no internet connection.
i think it was a good idea to write in boys' point of view so we got to know how they feel and their thoughts, ill read the sequel when my phone's battery won't try to kill
itself, like tonight :D

the ending was soo cutee!!!!!!! :D
i cant wait for the sequel!!!! :D

I loved it! :D
and thank you for thanking me of a few people for commenting :D
can't wait for the sequel woot woot! :D
I kind of want to join in on it, but I don't think I'm good :( I'd bring you guys down :o

Well I for one would also die if Zack were trying to get me back like that. I don't think I'd fight him. lol

Alex and Dallas... hmmm... something tells me there might be baby drama... i mean she could've lost it, but what if she didn't?

You guys have to do a sequel. You just have to. I'd be interested, but I hardly have time and I'm afraid I wouldn't be able to keep up!

SEQUEL!

blanklikepaper!
Heyy I told ya I would read it, though I've only read the first two chapters lmao
But I'm already addicted! So as I write this I'm like "come on type this shit so you can get back to reading!"
:D But I really love it!
Congrats on a really good story, and congrats to WhoInvitedTheMonster as well :)
Both of you are doing great! :DD

oh and try cousin instead of sister ;D

“Dally! Please tell me you’re okay!” He sounded worried. Awww Alex<3 that was adorable, maybe I don't hate him :D

So glad you updated, but what happened with Avery, I was confused... Zack saved her?

WHOA!!!! WHAT? Was she hallucinating? OMG UPDATE!!!

dude dude dude what the fuckkk

Oh Dally, love Alex, okay? it's Alex friggin Gaskarth. Avery, get back with Zack.

ughhhhh don't trust Zack and his musclar body!

Whoo! She didn't believe him. Good riddance. It would be too easy to forgive him. He's gotta work for it. Dallas needs to realize that love is out there, she just hadn't found it.... until one Alex Gaskarth came around... Just jump Dally! Fall in love.

I wouldn't believe him either! He'd be pissed. Liar!

awwhh you shouldn't forgive Zack this soon but I'm kinda happy DC and Avery made up :)

Uh oh, band practice is going to be, well probably lots of drama...

Oh i love it! Did she feel anything? Of course she did!