Every Breath I Breathe - Comments

You have a way with writing emotions. I swear, it's brilliant.

Holy shit.
This is hands down one of the best things i've ever read in my life.
<3

dude, this was so heartbreaking. but so so so good at the same time.
i find andy oliver attractive.. so good job at picking the boy (:
i also loved how you worked some of the lyrics into the story.
and how you worked so wonderfully with the song, even though you hate miley cyrus.
truly wonderful job allison (:

i'm going to have a very hard time picking the winner when all the entries come in.

SOOOOOO CUTE!!!!
for ... the majority of the story I thought that I See Stars where British... ideky but I did and then at the fourth of july reference i was like hmm... OH RIGHT!
xD
but i loved it it made me think of my friend and her new boo, me and mine and then my old one when the line i said to him revolving romance... *sigh* too much conflicting feelings i'm gonig to stop this comment now my love

oh, do you hear that?
that's the sound of you killing me in this contest.

this was so good. a little wordy in some places (maybe cause I already read some parts?) but I loved it, and it kept my attention the whole time.
Andy is such a sweetheart
and I love him :]

you're such a great author asldkfjals