Marked - Comments

This is great :) I'm very intrigued, to see where this leads

That was amazing. Update if you will please.

This had me really drawn in, and I can't wait to read more!
That line, "Angels don't hurt people, right?" It's amazing! Brilliant!

This story sounds really amazing already!
I hope you keep it going; I'm looking forward to it. :D

That was amazing, I was drawn into your writing. Please update more?
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That was a very interesting summary :)
And a very intriguing second sentence! It definitely pulls me in.
It was calling to her, like it was [pleading] to take a look outside. - "pleading for her" perhaps? As it is makes the window sound like a dog wanting to go for a walk
There were also a few grammar errors, but they're not too bad, I guess.
I loved the "Angels don't hurt people, right?" It's so ominous. The way you set the mood in this chapter was awesome!

Wow, this is amazing. A real cliffhanger, please continue before I fall off my seat. Your character so far is really intruiging and the plot is unique and makes me subscribe right now XD

My immediate thought when looking at the title was this book series.
I believe the first one was called Marked, but I can't remember.
anywho, it's a good series. check it out. :]

The story.
I loved the first chapter.
You've got a good way with making it so your reader can interact with your character.
The thing I love about good authors is that they can make their characters seem real.
And I feel that with yours.

Good job.

Amazing first chapter. I know what she's feeling because I'm also a little to curious and dare-develish. Can't wait to see what happens next. :) Good Luck.:)

This seems really interesting so far and I can't wait to see what is going to happen next!
*subscribes* ^.^

Please tell me there will be more! this is so interesting and i wanna know what happens! lol you should continue!!! :)

That was a good and interesting first chapter. Cliff hangers are always the best. :) Whenever you update again and if Marked ever gets me wanting more, I'll subscribe.

This is a really interesting start! Can't wait to see where it goes (:

Interesting start, already has me interested.
Update soon?