Diary of a Madman - Comments

Just read the first three chapter. Its really good :)

Yup. Couples are forming all around me... At least I'm not hopelessly panting after anyoneXD

It seems interesting so far, but since this is supposed to be a thriller/mystery/horror, I think you should start to build up more suspense as it you get deeper into the story. For the moment, it's fine since you're still setting up the plot and characters, but it could get a bit boring if you go on for too long. Other than that, great job!

hey my math teacher is crazy too, she makes us to Trig and Pythagoras, evil much
got any more???

hey i know how he feels my house (at night) is like it's right out of a freaking horror movie, or is it just me and my over-active imagination??
Eh i dunno
But i'd like to see more of your story :)

This isn't bad. Why do you think you'd get banned for it? Anyway, win or lose, keep going.