I think that Sarah is the zombie queen and has come to steal the kid... that's just my opinion and I hope I'm right ;D ? idek..my brain is gone from lack of sleep bahaha
Dear, I loved it! I loved how dramatical this story is :) I think you shall do extremely well in you're contests and btw I love our early morning tweet battles XD
So this was definitely different from your other one, that's for sure. But I thought that this was pretty good too. Pregnancy is a trendy topic, eh?
I liked that Andie was little more independent about the baby and how she didn't want to tell anyone, I have a big mouth so that wouldn't have worked for me. Even though I think that the abusive parent is another over used topic, I think that you worked it in pretty well. The only thing that bugged me was that it was pretty fast for Marshell to propose even though she was into Matt. Right? She kissed him? Thought it was Marshell? (Just reread it, sorry.) Now I'm confusing myself. Okaaaay.
Sorry, I leave long comments.
Anyway, I thought that it was interesting but with some added detail and a little more clarification on that kiss, it would make an (even more) awesome story(:
that's just my opinion and I hope I'm right ;D ?
idek..my brain is gone from lack of sleep bahaha