yay an update! Well my friend I think you could write the break to show Vince's thoughts and such or just flash back to it. I think getting away would really help her, maybe remind her all the feelings she has for Cassadee. :]
BWAHAHAH! I was right!! -dances- It's ok Zombies are not as cool as ninjas so in the next chapter ninjas will come and kidnap Hayley. Ok my really guess is similar to Ryan's. Maybe some paparazzi took a pic of the kiss and all hell breaks lose and Cassadee is heart broken and um..... NINJAS! Or maybe Hayley calls Alex and tells her she found Vince, and then Vince barfs on the grass... Ew.
AH-MAY-ZING! Best Love triangle story on this site! I'm making you a banner for sure! haha I wanna guess that Cassadee saw this kiss because she was looking for Vince... okay bad guess
i cant find the words to describe the awsomeness of this writing. its like something that i think is moving and heartfelt and very wellworded. you make me want to read more and ive been reading this all day it was just so good that i just couldnt stop reading this. i relly cant wait for the next chapter and i just want to let you know NONE of these chapters have been boring. i love this story.
Ooooooh I wanna guess that Vince like... um.. gets attacked? or hurts herself? or gets pissed drunk and hooks up with Hayley. But really loves her but is still with Cassadee so it just makes things worse for everyone. And... THEN THERE ARE ZOMBIES! That's my guess. Keep up the great work!