Passion's Killing Floor - Comments

I like the new layouts, even though I like the picture... :D
The story's just amazing, you've written it so well.

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-Katie

This was a cute chapter. (:
I can't believe it's almost over! D:

loved this chappy and i would love to read the Gerard Way story soooooo pleaseeeeeeeeeee message me or put the link

I like the new chapter! :D
And the layout is nice :)

I love this story so much cause im just sick of reading about cheating and brake ups and drama this is so refreshing

what?!
there is no way that this story can almost be over! D:

This is really good, and I think it's all right it's coming to an end, because it seems appropriate with the storyline and such. Anyway, great updates as usual.

...:( B..b...But there's only six more?! D:

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-Katie
P.S- The last two were as amazing as ever XD

There's a few mistakes here and there, but I really liked reading this story. I just read it all in one sitting.
... I should proooooobablyyyy go do my Spanish homework now. >>

awesome chapter!
the 'most perfect gentleman' part made me laugh. (:

That was amazing >.< The whole 'Ville being a man-whore' talk was perfect, and brilliantly written. Plus, at the end of the chapter when he was talking about sex, if we don't get sex at the start of the next chapter then you might have a riot on your hands :]

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-Katie

oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhh Ville is a sexy demon hahahahaha

Haha, I loved the chapter, and the girl [I forget her name ;P] seems so nice ^.^ I hope that she actually is, and not just secretly in love with Ville XD
Merry Christmas

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-Katie

Firstly, thanks so much for the two new chapters, they were just amazing. As was Ville proposing after sex. It just felt right. XD
I'm glad that things with Mindy seem to be a wee bit better, she seems really sweet.
Oh, before I forget, the first line of the second chapter just made me giggle like a madman/woman. >:D

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-Katie

i love it when i get to read two new chapters. :D
ahaha, Ville proposing after havin' sex seems so appropriate.
Mindy and Mary seem to be doing better as well (:

I really liked the update. Ville seems very in character 'bout the cheering up, and I loved the fact that she wanted sex instead of ice-cream. So yeah, you're really good with dialogue. Keep up the good work!

yet another amazing chapter.
the sex comment made me laugh when i thought i was going to cry for Mary. you displayed her emotions so well!
can't wait for the next update!

Thank you so so much for updating again today. And although I sort of suspected that Ville would offer to adopt her, it was still an amazing suprise. Haha, I'm crying at the moment because Mary Byrn is singing in the background :'3

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-Katie

Hey, I feel bad for not seeing your updates sooner but apparently the so-called "subscription" didn't quite work with this story. Uhm, it's really good. Like *really* good. Ville is definitely more believable in the last chapter (17) than in the recent five. I'm also thrilled that you paid attention to what I had said and explained in one of the ANs. I'm anxiously waiting for an update and I am quite curious as to how you're going to make it work with a kid on a rock tour.

...this was beautifully tragic. And you wrote it perfectly.

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-Katie