December 4th, 2010 at 07:09am
Passion's Killing Floor - Comments
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Just read the whole thing so far and I've enjoyed it. I think Ville was more believable during the first chapters (mostly where they wrote together), because he's seemed rather childish and not Ville-ish the last chapters. But I am going to subscribe because I do enjoy this, and I'm telling you this if you want to improve, because I think you're getting sidetracked with his relationship with Mindy.November 22nd, 2010 at 10:09pm
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Well, three chapters at a time ARE ways to a womans' heart <3
"You had sex with Dani?!" LULZ. c:
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-KatieNovember 21st, 2010 at 09:38am -
Oh, it's no bad thing posting THAT sex scene more than once ;]
Can't wait for the next chapters of course >.< All thirty of them x
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KatieNovember 19th, 2010 at 04:19pm -
Ah, you're welcome! :D
This is really a fantastic story.
Can't wait to see where it goes after this! :)
And a sequel would be cool!!November 19th, 2010 at 04:08am -
I sat and read this over one night, it's rare that I read fanfiction on here since I mainly write it. But thanks for developing a unique story line! and making Ville a believable character! And the sex scene was ...jwkdsfhskfhs
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That was amazing, super cute :3October 11th, 2010 at 04:51pm
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Wooo! so glad to see more chappys for this story! It's amazingly good,and i can't wait for more!
-KassandraOctober 11th, 2010 at 03:56am -
AAARHH!
I <3 this BIG style ;]
Although I'm having a hard time imagining V.Valo on a dating site :D
UPDATE.SOON.September 28th, 2010 at 11:02am -
I really love this story!
Definitely subscribing :)
I love Ville<33September 20th, 2010 at 02:25am -
I love this story soooooooo much!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! :)September 10th, 2010 at 11:17pm
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Aw, I love this story! I'm subscribing :)August 8th, 2010 at 10:07pm
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“Oh, are you gonna be my uncle?”
He turned to me with wide eyes, looking to me for what he should say. I just shrugged and he turned back to her.
“Um, well would you like for me to be?”
“Yeah! You can be my Uncle Ville! Can you help me spell the names above my people, Uncle Ville?”
That made me 'awww' and made this chapter the most adorable one I've ever read. I loved it. This story is so good, and you are a brilliant writer. I cannot wait until you update again!
<3July 12th, 2010 at 05:13am -
That is so cute! He is going to babysit!
You are so original
Update soon =)July 12th, 2010 at 03:08am -
can wait to read that gonna happen when they meet...June 15th, 2010 at 09:59pm
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I love the new layout!
And I just love this story.
The video chat with him shirtless was fantastic. Haha.
I'm so, so excited for them to meet! I can't wait!
<3June 14th, 2010 at 03:58am -
I love that song. I was actually listening to it while I was reading it.
Ironic, but I can't wait till they meet. I would act like her too if I was video chatting with Ville and he was shirtless.
Aw.
The layout is lovely. Keep up the good work.June 14th, 2010 at 12:14am -
This is so [tries to sound like Ville] r-r-r-romantic
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Update soon, darling.June 12th, 2010 at 05:07pm -
Sorry I am so slow to read the update! I liked it and am looking forward to reading more! :DJune 1st, 2010 at 12:59am
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Ah, I love, love this.
I'm sooo excited for them to meet.
Please, update soon!
<3May 30th, 2010 at 01:28am
This is absolutely amazing.