Carousel - Comments

This is a very intriguing story, I must say. thanks fore entering it into my pre-write. however, this is sounding.... well, like Paige is lesbian. So its a bit of a bother for me and while it may thus become the plotline, well... thats another topic.
Anyways, it was intriguing. Bringing a magical something into the average world isn't done like that too often, though I have heard of the carousel that plays with time so it was fun hearing about it again. I like the details and everything that you bring in. Your style is definietely original and I really enjoy how you write.
Great job!

love the updates.

very fantastical.... if that's a real word anyway. The whole arranged marriage is getting a new twist I've never seen before. Thank you for the refreshment. Will the whole story be your submission for my contest?

Wow! Amazing so far Dana :) I can't make a prediction, though, because I already know the end *ssshhhh* I'll keep it quiet just for you ;D haha

This is probobly one of my favorite stories! :D

I love this!(:

this is really good so far.
i like it =]