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  • bookworm1995

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    Hey, good story, very interesting from what i've read so far
    keep up and the good work
    October 27th, 2011 at 02:09am
  • Aly Jones

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    Yeah, I saw that! I love it. I found it as a kind of sick humor thing...ha ha. :)
    September 7th, 2011 at 10:39pm
  • FUELEDBYERIN

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    i just updated like three days ago :)
    September 7th, 2011 at 10:41am
  • Sinuzaki

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    Kinda just waiting for other updates here too.
    September 7th, 2011 at 03:52am
  • Aly Jones

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    I can type up anything in, like, a couple minutes if you really want someone to update. Typing a chapter is never a problem for me. XD
    August 26th, 2011 at 12:21am
  • FUELEDBYERIN

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    never XD I just kinda didnt want to keep updating and beng the only one i have some chapters saved but i was waiting for others.
    August 25th, 2011 at 06:43am
  • Aly Jones

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    I want some advice: Do y'all think it'd be weird if Jessalyn was a redhead?
    August 20th, 2011 at 06:16pm
  • Aly Jones

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    I think I'm going to edit my parts. >.< I was reading through my first one, and I honestly think that I can do better.

    By the way, are y'all giving up on this? Just wondering ... 'cause I haven't heard from anyone but love of your life.

    Thanks for reading my babble, ~Dreamer
    August 20th, 2011 at 06:05pm
  • Aly Jones

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    Umm ... yeah. I guess. (Sorry if I sound like I really don't care.)

    I'm still pretty new to the whole "writing" thing, so umm, yeah ... I guess if they're bothering you, you should, umm, fix 'em? If that made sense ...
    February 25th, 2011 at 12:15am
  • Sinuzaki

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    I think the story procession is coming along horrible. We haven't figured out how it's supposed to come along, and therefor, ALL the chapters come out a little repetitive.

    We also need to work on how we break out paragraphs and POVs while still in the same chapter.

    That's mainly what I was wanting to fix. Because for me, this story is just a big bowl of babble with amazing potential, and it's awesome, but those little things ^ there keep nagging me.
    February 24th, 2011 at 02:23am
  • Sinuzaki

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    Crap, I feel guilty now! D< I grew too fond of the characters!!!
    February 19th, 2011 at 04:57am
  • Sinuzaki

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    Ehm, I'm gonna have to respectfully decline from this Story. Perhaps in the future, should you allow me, I can come back, but I'm not feeling it anymore. :/ Sorry!
    February 19th, 2011 at 04:56am
  • Sinuzaki

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    I dont know how to explain...
    January 23rd, 2011 at 11:39pm
  • Aly Jones

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    Heh? I don't understand half of that sentence.
    January 23rd, 2011 at 09:55pm
  • Sinuzaki

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    Would you guys mind if I kinda rearranged the story a bit? I'd keep your writing the same, but I've noticed that it's REALLY choppy in its progression. The authors of each chapter still get their creds, of course.
    January 23rd, 2011 at 07:23pm
  • Aly Jones

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    lol. Updated. lol

    Sorry ... reading something HILARIOUS ...
    November 26th, 2010 at 10:58pm
  • Aly Jones

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    Okay! %D
    October 28th, 2010 at 09:18pm
  • Sinuzaki

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    I call next chapter!
    October 28th, 2010 at 03:18am
  • FUELEDBYERIN

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    that whole conversation was a true win lol
    October 16th, 2010 at 01:23am
  • Aly Jones

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    No, it is not. lol
    October 3rd, 2010 at 12:53am
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