Title Track - Comments

I really loved the angst that was written all over this. Kudos.

Okay, this was really amazing, I loved it so much. :) I'm sad it's over. :(

Chapter 15.
I LOVE YOU.
AND I CRIED.

OH MY GOD. Chapter 14 had be laughing out loud, then crying like a baby.
BRILLIANT. Aasdfjaekf aewijf asjf, really, this was fantastic.
Everything was so perfectly written and, and...so PERFECT.

<3

Okay I smiled through out the whole chapter. They were both so sweet and comforting towards each other. I loved the story :D

13. I couldn't help smiling!! Soooooo adorable, so sweet. I love how you did the ending of this chapter, gahhhhhhh, everything..just...<3.
AND ONLY TWO MORE PARTS! Ohhhh goodness. What am I going to do with myself?

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At one point, I started laughing because of how stuborn Brendon was being [chapt. 10-11] And I felt super bad for Ryan because he's trying to fix things, but it's like punching a brick wall.

Then chapt. 12. LOVED THIS: “Oh, good. I was… I was wondering, if maybe, maybe you’d want to meet me somewhere?”
It feels like high school.
'Cause, with those five words, I kinda got to see a little bit of their history - like, their beginning and everything. Yeah, I really liked that.

Wonderful :-]]

Beautiful.
I really liked when Brendon said, "Don't call me Bren." I thought that really added to his feelings about the situation and it was a very subtle way of showing his struggle and stuff.
Also, I giggled when you described the band playing in the background, because I've been to a lot of local shows, and that's what always happens - something is too loud and vocals can never be heard. So that was very relatable.

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LOVED IT.
You did an excellent job of setting that scene on the roof. Wonderfulwonderfulwonderful.

XD

I'm getting mad at people because they're not commenting on this. And I'm the only one and it makes me look creepy. Which I'm not *creeps*

Chapter 7 was amazing. I loved the description of Z. I was stalking her the other day, and you perfectly described the vibe I got from her.
Love the short, choppy sentences; makes it seem realistic.

I am going to print off this story and carry it around in my notebook with me :-]]

OH MY GOD.
I LOVE this. I LOVE you.
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*whew*

Really - and I'm sure I've told you this a billion times - but you are such a FANTASTIC writer.
This story is better than, than...A REALLY GOOD STRAWBERRY SMOOTHIE! (which is pretty damn wonderful)

I'll stop being obsessive and creepy now, but this is genius.

XD

Chapter 3. OH NO! When he says his heart is incomplete, I feel it too :-[ I like how he has those few thoughts of denial, "it can't possibly be who I think it is" because it gives it feeling of...reality? I'm really liking this story in general, and I'm very excited for updates :-]]]]]

Song suggestions [that probably suck because I can't find my iPod]:
- Winter Passing by The Academy Is...
- The Party Scene by All Time Low
- Round Here by Counting Crows
- Painting Flowers by All Time Low
- Cape Town by The Young Veins
- Vanilla Twilight by Owl City
- All Again For You by We the Kings
- Losing It by Never Shout Never
- Like We Used To by A Rocket to the Moon
- If You Can't Live Without Me, Why Aren't You Dead Yet? by Mayday Parade
- Your Song by Mayday Parade

...and that's all that I can think of at the moment!
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I loved it. I really did. I like how you gave us both sides, at different times. Also, the handicap stall thing - sounds tempting.....

Excellent, you're fantastic :-]]