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  • Discontinued

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    Wow, this has to be the best Joker story I've read on this or any other site. I'm amazed that this story kept my interest all the way to the end. Thank you so much for writing this story. You've done an awesome job. Damn, I'm still giddy about the last chapter. :)
    August 6th, 2012 at 04:07am
  • raroman

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    Hey look its Christina Augeilera! Or however you spell her name...
    August 6th, 2012 at 02:08am
  • Saiyuo12

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    Great story.
    February 3rd, 2012 at 09:39am
  • Lee Hi;

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    So I just finished the story. Whew! Fifty chapters but it was all worth my time. You really know how to keep a person going. It's after midnight where I'm at, haha.

    I have never read a Batman fan-fiction before but this story was one of the best I have ever read. I do say I love a lot of stories but you can really tell how much I like them by the size of the comments I give. (Especially if I just read the whole thing in one sitting and I have a lot to say.....type....whatever.)

    First off, this story was absolutely wonderful! I know you've probably heard that a lot but not even Taylor Lautner trying to kiss me would stop me from clicking onto the next chapter. (That is a cmpliment by the way.) I loved the plot you chose for it and how you integrated the Riddler into it as he is my second favorite villian in the Batman series. (Next to the Joker of course.)

    I believe you did choose Christina Aguilera to portray Nikki and I absolutely loved that character! I admired her spunk and lovingness towards Jack once she got to know him. As for Jack, well, I kept hearing the amazing Heath Ledger's voice in my head when he spoke and that just made the story seem even more realistic and amazing. Of course, I heard Jim Carrey for the riddler.

    The twists that you created inticed me and I was thinking these exact thoughts when she and Jack were going at it: Oh, yeah. She's gonna get pregnant. This story made me very empathetic and I thank you for that.

    Unfortunatly, (and I really hate to do this so please forgive me) when the story was about over and she was talking about Spencer's death, it seemed a bit....rushed. It was like she was very apathetic to her brother's death. I got a big reaction out of her grandmother's death but it was a little brushed off with Spencer's. I'm not sure if that is just because it's the end and everything hits that fast moving pace like in the movies but it just seemed a little off to me.

    Don't get me wrong, I loved your story to death and it may just have been myself interpreting it wrong so I don't want you to get too mad at me. Although, now that I've mentioned it, it seems that everything really speeds up at the end. Have you noticed that? Maybe it's just me but at the end of everything (t.v. shows, books, movies, etc.) it just seems like everything is pushed out there all at once so it can end.

    Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this and it is definitely one of my favorites; one that I shall be encouraging other people to read. Have a lovely day, my dear and continue to write amazing stories!

    Love a very pleased reader,
    Katie
    October 16th, 2011 at 06:32am
  • Reader_23

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    I loooooved it!!!! =)
    October 10th, 2011 at 11:20pm
  • SufferingSweetSorrow

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    Just finished this, was amazing. loved it, very cute :D
    July 30th, 2011 at 05:48am
  • StiltzScreamsRemedy

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    .... I just realized, Nikki's grandmother has the same last name as the Joker, does that mean their related? o_O I'm barely on chapter 15 so spare me if I'm far off and that was a simple mess up of last names...
    December 12th, 2010 at 10:35pm
  • iLikeCookiesDoYou?

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    OMG is there gonna be a sequel?!?!?!?!?!?
    September 7th, 2010 at 01:59am
  • AndyChaotic;

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    awwwww :(
    I'm so sad its over :(
    sequel? :D

    gordon found them and his family and wanna take jack back to jail! :D
    September 4th, 2010 at 05:57am
  • Slow Down Sisky

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    *cheers in Jerry Springer-like fashion* Sequel! Sequel!
    Just kidding(: Seriously, this has been one of my favorite stories of all time. I'm a sucker for a good Joker romance, and yours was beautifully written.
    Bravo(:
    September 4th, 2010 at 12:48am
  • AnnieArchie

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    This genuinely was a great story, I enjoyed the anticipating the waiting process until another chapter came out- and the suspense of how she would cope with it all in the end. Loved it :)
    <3
    September 3rd, 2010 at 07:29pm
  • geeksdarling

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    Thank you for taking me away from reality for a while, and creating this amazing story. ^^ <3
    September 3rd, 2010 at 09:43am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    perfect ending
    September 3rd, 2010 at 05:26am
  • from mars.

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    I adore this story :)
    Thank you so much for creating it!
    September 3rd, 2010 at 04:30am
  • Aprilette

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    WAAAAH it's over! So sad... but I loved this story and I thank you for uploading/creating it ^_^
    September 3rd, 2010 at 04:00am
  • xXxMaggotxXx

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    This is such an amazing story. I love Joker stories, but this one seriously takes the cake. Can't believe it's over. <3 (:
    September 3rd, 2010 at 03:49am
  • CIGbaby.

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    One more chapter?! Nooo, I have been reading this from the start! It is too amazing to end, but I guess all good things must end.... *tear*
    September 2nd, 2010 at 04:52am
  • SHYLA01

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    One more chapter to go! ah a changing time :)
    September 1st, 2010 at 10:55am
  • from mars.

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    Great chapter!
    Thank goodness the Riddler and Nikki's mom are dead
    September 1st, 2010 at 10:24am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    oh cool!
    September 1st, 2010 at 05:56am