Bursting Red - Comments

holy crap I absolutely LOVED this story! it was so sad!!! you wrote it so powerfully it really had an impact on me and even was powerful enough to change my mood. I nearly cried like 800 times XD The ending was really wonderful but sad too. Anyway, excellent story

Took me a good few hours, but once I started... oh gosh, I only got up once to use the bathroom xD (You probably didn't need to know that, but anyway)
Wowwie wow, wow, wow. I'm sad that it's all over. Absolutely amazing. Nezumi was such a unique character, and her little baby's got her daddy's spunk. x3 LOVED it.

another amazing story =)
yaoi?
I don't but I know a friend who does =) I can recommand a story if you do yaoi.

I'mma cry...I guess it was as happy of an ending as could be managed, but I still wanna cry.

And as for new material, message me or something and tell me when youv'e got something new out, mmkay? I'll gladly give it a chance ^^

Oh. My. Gosh.

So, Nezumi's alive, and she still wants Deidara and even asks where he is even though she knows exactly where he is and that she can't have him - at least not then.
This isn't the end...right? Because she still has to see her jerkoff parents again, and I'm half-thinking they're going to disown her, and...ugh. I'm soooo confusing myself right now.

Well, I love the story. Need I say more? ^^

I'm agreeing with the above...this cannot stop here for much longer. I've only just read it and can't wait for more!!!
(sorry I haven't commented the last few chapters, I've gotten a wee bit lazy XDDD)

gasp! Update quickly! I can't stand not knowing if she died or not!

she seems....stronger then she was when she first got to the akasuki hide out. I can't really explain how or why.
I love the update!

Sorry it's taken so long...computer at home has a virus (I'm at my sister's again).
Anyway, still loving it, and I'm curious as to how you're going to wrap it all up!!!
Until next time.

loved the update!
eh I prob wouldn't read it. Thae story you put on FF
not really a character I favor :/
but I do think you should put another one on here after this....please?

plz tell your not going to kill her!! ugh!! the suspence!! hehehehe

Well...that was kind of sudden XDDD

And...Itachi's 'I hope you can run fast' or whatever - he knows that Deidara is going to try to get her out? Or is he going to help Dei-Dei get her out, but then chase after her when Leader-sama orders it...? Or what? I'm overthinking and confusing myself.

Great update, you're building suspense and I love it!

Until next time XD

mm lots and lots of drama. That's all i have to say

Still completely loving it, and your new story sounds interesting, to say the least.

I hope Deidara can get her out before he's supposed to kill her...even though it means we have to leave Dei-Dei behind...ick. It's a lose-lose situation, isn't it?

Love it, can't wait for more!

love the story... it explores how deidara became who he was and the girl who saw it all. You have an excellent talent for stories... the best FICTION stories on the internet are yours xD

You are literally trying to kill me. You know that?

I would DIE if I were Nezumi. If I couldn't draw, ever again?! Drawing is my life. I want to be an artist. Concepts, video games, things like that. So I feel an abnormally strong pang of sympathy for Nezumi. And they'll force Dei-Dei to kill her in two weeks if she lives that long?!

He won't. He'd better not.

But then they'd probably go ahead and kill her to teach him a lesson.

This is soooo not cool!

Fill in the broken gaps in your rickety, cliff-hanging bridge...please? XD

whoa epic!!!
She can't paint AND if they don't escape in 2 weeks he has to kill her?!?!?!?!
OMG rode block much?
Loved the chapter!
so much suspense!

I loved it! Cannot wait for more.
Why oh why does Deidara have to be Akatsuki? *sigh*.
Until your next amazing update, eh?

oh. I love this story. That's weird...im moving to! Well i don't balme you for being busy! =)
Loved the update.

I love the drawing! The eyes are very detailed!
lOVED READER THE SUPER LONG CHAPTER.
The update was awesome!
the akasuki...hmmm I wonder exactly how it will effect them but only time will tell =)