Bursting Red - Comments

The updates never disappoint! A very welcome distraction with all that's happening around my hometown right now - a kid I've known for two years and is the year-and-a-half long boyfriend of one of my good friends has been missing for about three days. Swept away up a creek, so there's not really much chance...so yeah. I'm really happy to have an update to read to get my mind off of things.

And your picture? The proportions aren't horribly off. The one thing I noticed is that the head is big, but otherwise, I didn't see anything else. (I'm an aspiring artist...so, yeah. haha...)
You do hands and knees better than me...xP

...dotdotdot...dotdotdot...

Uh-oh. Nezumi-kun's in trouble...or will be. And she's growing a bit of a backbone, isn't she? Hmm...
Until next time, then!!!

So, now I'm HOOooOooooOoOme!

And I loved the two chapters. Well written, and we saw the Akatsuki!! What will happen when they catch up, hmmm?

And Nezumi, suicide is NOT the answer! And anyway, do you think Deidara would let you plummet to your death? I hope not. That's some screwed up excuse for love if he would. Hehe xP

Until next time!!!

suspense. I love it!

haha nice smut lol They r so cute!

The last line was cute...but I bet Nezumi isn't too happy about playing a 'bigger part' than Deidara. She's too innocent to like being the reason some people are dying...

Oh, hi, by the way. I got to get on =3 Not to update...but I'm reading this xP

Loved the chapter. Can't wait for more!

awwww The last line was so cute!

Beautiful.

intersting......veryyyy interesting lol

Aw. Deidara...don't feel bad. It would freak me out to have them there, too. At least for a while. And being touchy about them? Meh. I could just scare whoever I wanted and that would be that.

On a completely perverted note...I bet those extra mouths would make SOME THINGS a bit more interesting...

Hehe xP Sorry I'm a bit Hyper...
Loved the update, though! Until next time xP

aww poor diedara

Mouths. In his hands. I was wondering when they'd come in =3
But now I'm seriously freaked out. Deidara goes from a sweet ninja to...insane soon-to-be-Akatsuki type murderer person dude...He scares me now. Oh, well. He doesn't scare me enough to scare me AWAY. Haha. I'll be back with your next update!!!

suspense! I say, suspense! Don't worry about not updating for a week, a good story is never rushed =)

Oh, wow. That was kind of...unexpected, even though you'd mentioned her having that sort of dream...haha.
Dei-kun's been a baaaaaad boy...hasn't he?
If only he could be as sweet and innocent as he seems...but that's hard when you're a ninja, I suppose. And when you kill people, it's hard to be sweet and innocent.
Oh, well. I love the story, and Nezumi was actually outgoing!!! Goooood girl. Goood little Nezumi-chan.
HAha. Sorry, It's like, 5:30 in the morning and I didn't get to bed around midnight and I haven't had enough sugar to fully wake me up so i can crash later...so kind of a little hyper in the sleepy way.
Can't wait for more!

...that's ALL? I was hoping for a bit more action, or Nezumi/Dei-Dei, or SOMETHING after not having my Deidara-kun fix for like, a week!
Oh, well. It was just as amazing as always. You do such a good job on descriptions and such =3
Well, until your next fantabulisticallyawesomazing update =3

Wow this is amazing! :D
keep up the great work! :P

AMAAAAAAZING!!!
She...she kissed him!!! And then HE KISSED HER!
AMAZINGLYFANTABULISTICALLYAWESOMELYSUPERDUPERUBERFANTASTIC!
Yes. I make up words. Deal.
But I loved it, and I can't wait to see what you do next =3

one word.
AWESOMENESS

I'm thinking the same as starbella =3
I'm like AWWWWWWW no WAAAAAAAAAY!
Then, OMZ DEI-kun is SOOOO sweet.
Then, "Why doesn't something go ahead and happen between them?!"
Then, why does Dei-kun have to be so mean later?
And then OMZ YOU SHOULD UPDATE AGAIN SOOOOOON!
Please? xP Loved the chapter. Sorry...I'm hyper xP

for some reason this chapter made me think 'awwwwww'
I could totally picture them together on the rain =)