Hatred is Easy to Win, Hard to Lose. - Comments

Keep writing! It's really good and I like the who essence of it! Definitely going to watch out for the next chapter!

continue writing pleeeeeeeeaaaaassssseee :) awesome start :D

KEEEEEEP GOING, PUHLEASE?
It's FREAKIN ahmazing :)
I love everything!

Keep wrotong. It's fantastic. If you don't, leprachauns will take yours bones and replace them with slinkees. You don't want that to happen now, do you? -_-

Hell yeah, you should keep writing. :)
It's amazing.

By the way, you got a word wrong.

"He was her breathe."

Take out the 'e' in 'breathe' to make it 'breath.'
Nice work, I'm waiting for the next chapter! :D

This is really great. Im subscribing.

Just a quick tip. In this sentence : She flinched in shock. Did the girl just talked to her?" it should be talk not talked. And like a few paragraphs lower when she is stuttering, fix your spacing with the quotes.

On the whole, its amazing. Keep going

I like the banner, the background and the way you write it. It's pretty good, so I would like to say that you should continue this one. I'm subscribed.

I am subscribing. :3

Keep. Definitely keep.