Woah. That was intense. I like it. I rather enjoyed how described Kiss and Jarhed's relationship - how his was sexual and hers was emotional and how she was the leader and he was the follower and how the girls noticed it. It made it more interesting and the emotion much more intense and real to believe. I really liked this. You have a good chance. :D
I like it.
I rather enjoyed how described Kiss and Jarhed's relationship - how his was sexual and hers was emotional and how she was the leader and he was the follower and how the girls noticed it. It made it more interesting and the emotion much more intense and real to believe.
I really liked this. You have a good chance. :D