May 12th, 2010 at 01:27am
I thought this was really good and I liked how you didn't glamourise the vampire into being all sexy and mysterious. It was a good take on the vampire-slayer side of things and it was obvious the effort you put into this. It was so detailed and I enjoyed it so much. Definitely the best thing you've written, and I liked the ending especially. :)
Sorry this isn't any longer but I wanted you to have a comment now.
Anyways, the amount of detail you put into it was great. I really appreciate that. And the ending was nice, happy endings are always fun to read.