July 18th, 2010 at 06:11pm
Happily Ever After - Comments
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this was soooo cute! I loved it. I was 'awwing' alot :DJune 16th, 2010 at 10:50pm
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That was so sweet and adorable. It was absolutely amazingMay 22nd, 2010 at 07:05pm
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*haveMay 20th, 2010 at 03:08am
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I see why people love this.
It was astounding.
So beautiful
Perfect.
You ahve so much talent!May 20th, 2010 at 03:08am -
ARG! I typed up this huge long comment about this and then something I pressed the wrong button and I lost it all...
Urrgghh... this makes me so mad...
Okay, I'm gonna try again.
First of all, this is probably one of the most adorable stories I've ever read.
Maya is seriously the cutest little girl. She really does brighten everything up.
And the way Cameron interacts with her is just precious :]
Jay is really the sweetest guy ever. He's so supportive of Cameron - I love him!
The scene where they both kind of confessed their feelings to each other was perfection.
Love, love, loooveed it!
And the sex scene was just... yum :] But still sweet at the same time, which I liked.
I was really glad it wasn't just straight-up smut. That wouldn't have fit the story as well.
Your grammar and spelling were very good, which is definitely a plus.
thank you for entering my contest! Good luck!May 16th, 2010 at 04:06am -
I absolutely loved this, it was just too cute. :]May 14th, 2010 at 04:48am
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Hot.Mess. FTW!!! :DMay 14th, 2010 at 04:47am
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Awww! That ending was too adorable.
I FREAKING LOVED THIS.
I couldn't get enough.
Your writing is the best! (:May 14th, 2010 at 04:45am -
So I know I took forever and a day to comment this.
And you know the reasons xD
BUT IT WAS SO WORTH THE WAIT! <3
It was so cute and adorable and amazing and aweeee <3
You're gonna win.
I dun care if there are 30 other entries.
You're gonna win.
-firm nod-May 14th, 2010 at 04:05am -
its so cute and perfect!
and there are two types of cheesy, one that doesnt admit its cheesy and ends up sounding horrible.
then you have your cheesy: you dont deny it (although it was more cliche then cheesy) and it turns out so cute and awesome!
Yeah, im raiding your profile for more stories. againMay 14th, 2010 at 03:09am -
I like long.
[TWSx2.]
This was cute. <3May 14th, 2010 at 01:49am -
WOOT WOOT!
You just made my day with this.
I was all like 0.0
But, it was really well written and I loved it!
Hot.Mess FTWMay 13th, 2010 at 09:16pm -
I.
LOVE.
THIS.
SO.
FUCKING.
MUCH.
<3May 12th, 2010 at 02:47pm -
I love it. Adorable, and awesome.
Can't wait for the next update!May 12th, 2010 at 06:58am -
please continue.
Maya's so adorable!! (>.<)
i seriously hope you win! *fingers crossed*May 12th, 2010 at 03:28am -
youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaze
meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
ohhhhh,
yessssssssssssssss
yoooooooooou
doooooooooooooooooooo
<33333333333333333333333May 12th, 2010 at 02:52am -
adorable!! :3May 12th, 2010 at 01:38am
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I really like this! I will continue readingMay 12th, 2010 at 12:06am
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I really like this! I will continue readingMay 12th, 2010 at 12:06am
But I decided to read it again,
because I love it so much!
Congratulations on first place,
this definitely deserved it!<3