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  • Chemical Candy

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    I liked it, it was really touching, but I felt there could have been a little more. But still a great story :)
    July 4th, 2013 at 07:36am
  • AngelDemon

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    Geez, you write well! It's so touching!

    And, just curious, but is the song at the end, which you quoted parts of, Fly by Hilary Duff? I have the album *nervous laughter*.
    January 4th, 2008 at 12:36am
  • azwethinkweiz

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    wow..
    that was sad..
    but sweet though =]

    amazing!

    xx
    December 2nd, 2007 at 01:06am
  • Carver Edlund

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    Haha, yay! Comment virginity stolen! That was absolutely great man!
    November 29th, 2007 at 05:52pm
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