I really do love this, you're an extremely talented writer:).
I have one question to ask though...On your status, when you say 'Have to finish this by 11:00 tonight!!!!!!!' Does that mean you're finishing the story completely? Please say no:[ ! This is a great plot and you could write far more than just a few chapters, maybe even writing a sequel if you planned it right...
Also, I like how Emma is so unemotional, it's unusual for the main character:).
I have one question to ask though...On your status, when you say 'Have to finish this by 11:00 tonight!!!!!!!' Does that mean you're finishing the story completely? Please say no:[ ! This is a great plot and you could write far more than just a few chapters, maybe even writing a sequel if you planned it right...
Also, I like how Emma is so unemotional, it's unusual for the main character:).