Homepage › Stories › There Is a Thing Called Love › Comments

There Is a Thing Called Love - Comments

  • USERNAME..

    USERNAME.. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    !Love This Story!!!! But...Isn't Blaise Supposed To Be African American??
    January 26th, 2012 at 03:00am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

    Mikey Whiskey Hands. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    :D
    July 10th, 2010 at 12:45am
  • kaylynnjaeannxox

    kaylynnjaeannxox (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    Daaaaaamn.
    July 2nd, 2010 at 09:41pm
  • Shadowday

    Shadowday (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    Nice. More please!
    July 2nd, 2010 at 07:07am
  • Kawaii Emotions;

    Kawaii Emotions; (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    You should do an original story, it'd be awesome :)
    June 30th, 2010 at 06:01am
  • FightnTheUrge2LuvU

    FightnTheUrge2LuvU (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    I LIKE THIS ONE!!!!! very interesting...i like the whole brother sister thing...lol :) subscribing!!!!
    June 23rd, 2010 at 07:59pm
  • Kawaii Emotions;

    Kawaii Emotions; (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    I've never read a Harry Potter fic,so a few of the terms confuse me, but no the less I enjoy this story.
    June 23rd, 2010 at 11:10am
  • Nulll

    Nulll (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♂
    Age:
    18
    Location:
    Thailand
    totally fantastical! I'm in love with Draco, so I was totally stoked when i realised that this wasnt just going to be another boring Draco Malfoy Boy Toy story =] You totally made my day!

    Btw I subscribed, update please! <33333
    May 31st, 2010 at 08:00am
  • solarflarestares

    solarflarestares (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    26
    Location:
    United States
    Hm...
    I choked on a Skittle once.
    This Tuesday, actually.
    I told my friend Thomas...
    He said, "So... I guess the rainbow is fucking angry at you!"
    May 27th, 2010 at 10:33pm
  • Shadowday

    Shadowday (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    awesome! more please!
    May 26th, 2010 at 02:11am
  • solita

    solita (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    My favorite quote in the 2nd chapter:

    "I WANT TO HAVE WILD, HOT, CRAZY MONKEY SEX WITH YOU EVERYTIME I FUCKING LOOK AT YOU!"[/time]
    May 25th, 2010 at 12:00pm
  • Natural_Born_Synner

    Natural_Born_Synner (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    Usually I'm not a big fan of Harry Potter fan fics but this one is an exception
    May 22nd, 2010 at 06:55pm
  • Farce.

    Farce. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    Enjoyable update! Looking forward to another speedy update! Malfoy is so amazing.
    May 22nd, 2010 at 03:34pm
  • precursors

    precursors (105)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♂
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    I like it, but there are a few grammar mistakes. You're just missing some commas, and some commas could be semi-colons or need an entirely new sentence. Also, it's a little confusing when they add to the dialogue - sometimes you can't tell if they said it or not. Also, the paragraphs should have a space between them - it makes it easier to read.
    And, only once that I saw, you used "their" instead of 'there."

    Other than that, I like it a lot :)
    May 21st, 2010 at 10:06pm
  • x-Julia-x

    x-Julia-x (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Russian Federation
    Aw I really like this story!!! Your layout is so cute it makes it so much more fun to read :D
    Come check out my Draco story too if you want, it's called unicorn turds XDD
    May 20th, 2010 at 07:42pm
  • Farce.

    Farce. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    Cool story, might want to re-edit and create paragraphs instead of one big chunk.
    May 17th, 2010 at 10:44pm
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

    Mikey Whiskey Hands. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    this is great, More details and telling what there doing like where there going would make it better :D Other than that It's great! I subscribed. :D

    Update soon! <333
    May 16th, 2010 at 02:50am
  • fallen_angel94

    fallen_angel94 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    I like it just a bit more detail abt hers & draco's relationship would be great
    May 12th, 2010 at 02:31am
  • Atrana26

    Atrana26 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    absolutly love the story so far. i am so looking forward to chapter 3
    May 12th, 2010 at 02:28am
Homepage › Stories › There Is a Thing Called Love › Comments