Headstrong - Comments

Really good update ^^ love it x

yay! i love this storyu soooo muchh!!
please update soon., lol

this story gives me whiplash. in a good way. Too much sexual tension between the 2 of them! Ugh.I Don't like luke at all.

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i was sixty one!

**PAGE CLAIM!**

i really really really really love this :]

Hehe, war!!
Wait---NOO!! WAR!!
Poor Krys....not so much Kage, but Krys...cause he's just..awww..:D
Wait, you already know that..:P
Lovveee this!! :D

This is so good! Boylove, teeheee. <3
I love how both of them are so controlling... Usually I read about an innocent guy and a man-whore, but two equally sexy guys fighting for who's the best? DAAAAYYYUUUUMMM.

Subbing. (:

I love ^^ Poor Kageyy. I love that kid heehee

um, just wanted to point this out:
on the picture for the layout (obviously) where you guys meant to type "Headstrong" whoever made it actually typed "Headstong" instead.
other than that the story is great! :)

Ohhhh shittttt.
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I've only read the first two chapters if you will but they were good :D
I'm gonna keep reading :)

oh wow!
great story!!
keep up the amazing work!!
update soon!!!!
XD

How does someone look like Krys, I'll never know!!
D:
But I really liked that one...cause it just put Kage into a bad light for me hehehe!! :D
I feel a tad sorry for Kage...cheeer/

Lol I love how you put 'He is a man-whore' into the summary. It made me laugh for some reason.

I liked this though. I have never been one to really read slash, but I liked yours. It's kind of original compared to the usual slash plotlines. Thank you for being unique. I read the first two chapters and really like it so far. Keep writing it, definitely.

I really do like this, it's quite amusing.
Sorry for the late comment @TheTallOne, I lost internet signal last night :P
I love Krys, he's awesome in this! And Kage is quite humourous too!! xD
I loved that class bit, with the picture, I mean, don't we all wish someone would do that to our teachers? It'd be classic man!! :D
This is amazing.
God yourselves a new subscriber !! xD

I like the laid back style of writing and the egos come through very well which is quite a shock because I havent read many stories where the personality shines through so well. I have only read the first 5 chapters but I will continue reading it tomorrow.

I'm not a particular slash fan, and to be honest, the first chapter didn't pull me in.
I skipped that whole part of you describing what Krystal looks like, because, to be honest, it's irrelevant, and boring. The best way to describe a person's looks is to show not tell. And by that I mean, as the story progresses we should learn what he looks like. Little things that he does will help us, like 'flipping his black hair' or something.

The ending of the first chapter gives me a bit of an indication of what this character is like (extremely cocky) but the chapter didn't win me over. And the layout doesn't help either. That color blue on that black background is blinding.

OHkay.
So I just finished reading all the way up to the last chapter,
and I must say,
I do enjoy the story plot.
It's original and interesting.
I say,
please do,
continue. :]
xo

Woah. This story is insanely addicting in case ya didnt know. Im like... Desperately awaiting to see how everything works out in the end. Loved the last chapter, really makes you think the whole issue through.... Update soon? :] Much love <3

Woahh, I love it. Keeps getting better and better. It's so well written and I NEED an update =P
They're both such wonderful characters. Not to mention, AMAZING.
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