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  • burple17

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    Awwww, that was lovely!
    September 14th, 2012 at 11:05pm
  • Cellophane Soldier

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    i just read this whole thing and it's REALLY good.
    February 6th, 2011 at 10:52pm
  • shellieann

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    Good Story.
    February 3rd, 2011 at 11:15pm
  • Kissmett

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    I thought Kiernan told Rhys all that stuff about her family when he took her to the nurse. Why does she have to keep telling him?
    January 21st, 2011 at 08:47pm
  • worldclass

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    Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!!! *wails* it's over!!!!!!

    I don't think you need a sequel. A spinoff with a different character I wouldn't mind but...I don't know. I kinda don't want to have that couple go through any more crap. On the other hand, I want more adorable scenes of them again! Maybe we need another epilogue? Lol. No, the fact that they'll be going to the same college is enough. Gah! Such a spazztastic story! Thanks so much for writing this :)

    Keep up the good work!
    January 20th, 2011 at 09:00am
  • worldclass

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    I loved chapter 32! Kiernan is so strong and vicious. I love that she went all the way to Seattle to kick his ass instead of just moping like I would have expected someone in her situation to. That chapter was just perfect. Now off to read more!
    January 20th, 2011 at 08:52am
  • Dark Vixen

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    So sad to see the ending to this. :(
    You should have had them getting married... that would have been awesome.
    Good job hun! :D
    January 20th, 2011 at 05:29am
  • the denizen

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    Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, I can't believe this story has come to an end!
    I'm not sure if I want there to be a sequel because I sort of like the idea of letting the reader's imagination fill in the blanks. I mean, there's so much that can go wrong or right- and of course everyone would imagine things differently. However, if you write a sequel I'd definitely read it. (:
    January 20th, 2011 at 04:34am
  • minimaldisagreement

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    I vote for a sequel...or even a Gen or Lydia spin off...cause you never really get to know them but they are really important to the story. Please? It would make me happy :)
    January 19th, 2011 at 02:32pm
  • XHanakayeX

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    I just cried and wanted more.
    I love you
    January 19th, 2011 at 01:26pm
  • Crimson_Catastrophe

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    please write a sequel it would make me oober happy!

    p.s i love this story it was amazing i am truly and deeply sad that it had to end :(
    January 19th, 2011 at 09:30am
  • worldclass

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    Ah. That was actually chapter 7. And I just finished 8. Rhys that tease! (Sorry for comment spamming, btw. I just thought I'd comment as I went along...)
    January 19th, 2011 at 08:40am
  • worldclass

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    Well...I've moved up to Chapter 10 I think. Rhys is ridiculously adorable. And I love how prickly Keirnan is <3
    January 19th, 2011 at 08:35am
  • worldclass

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    Only on chapter 3, but I wanted to say that I love the mom! "You like him, you wanna hug him..." made me laugh so hard :)
    January 19th, 2011 at 08:21am
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    So I just randomly spent many hours reading this whole story and I loved it. I can totally relate to Kieran. This story was wonderful.
    January 19th, 2011 at 06:37am
  • heartbreak recs.

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    its amazing just how freaking adorable they are
    it has to work for them!
    January 19th, 2011 at 06:09am
  • the denizen

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    To be honest, I'm completely in love with this story. I'm a bit angry that I didn't know about it sooner, but glad I found it nonetheless!
    January 18th, 2011 at 04:16pm
  • XHanakayeX

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    I think this is my favorite chapter yet.
    Just saying.
    I loves you more than kieran loves Rhys, cause I would drive to the moon and back for you. Making the whole driving to Seattle thingy seem like an afternoon drive.
    January 18th, 2011 at 01:33pm
  • Dark Vixen

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    I have spoken... again.
    January 18th, 2011 at 06:36am
  • Dark Vixen

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    Please.
    January 18th, 2011 at 06:36am