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  • Gingerbread Nan

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    I shall wait for more.
    September 7th, 2010 at 01:47am
  • mistery gurl

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    loved it! im not confused anymore :}
    thank you!
    August 18th, 2010 at 11:10am
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    loved it but im confused as to who scotty is...
    August 17th, 2010 at 08:02am
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    omg i hope you do a chapt on a convo of therez where they talk about fave music and all dat stuff :}
    cant wait for more
    August 14th, 2010 at 07:08am
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    wow, she must be freaking sick, im surprized the doc released her!
    i hope she gets better :}
    July 23rd, 2010 at 06:16am
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    wow i loved it!!
    July 22nd, 2010 at 10:12am
  • mistery gurl

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    i love it! im suscribed! please update soon!
    June 30th, 2010 at 09:44am
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    i love it! im suscribed! please update soon!
    June 30th, 2010 at 09:44am
  • Skylar Skyline

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    This is a nice, well going story. I like it.
    Keep it up (:
    June 29th, 2010 at 12:53am
  • wild rover

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    Oh whoa! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to comment! I've been hanging out with a friend for the past two days or so and haven't been on the computer much at all :P But anyway, I'm here now so that counts right?

    And poor Johnny, he always gets the blame! Geez. We have to stick together, y'know? Short people always get picked on, man! Heh, just messing around :P

    It seems like Crystal is going to have a few trust issues, and I really can't wait to see what you do with them! But it seems that Jimmy has been really understanding so far--so I'm hoping that he won't be trying to push her into the whole 'father-daughter' relationship right away. It's obvious that she wants that, too, but I think she might need some time to adjust to things.

    Nonetheless, I hope she warms up to him!

    Keep it up, kid-whose-younger-than-me ;)
    June 26th, 2010 at 08:00am
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    Yay :D I've got to say, I'm loving the frequent updates! Hahah. This was just as cute as the last chapter--but her scratching is a little worrying to me. I hope it doesn't develop into some self-mutilating thing :o And I'm glad you included this chapter as it really explained where the men came from ;) Oh, oh! I just love how Leana is willing to back Jimmy up, especially if she's only now just found out about her! And the guys, too. They're all so sweet!

    Can't wait to see what happens next :D
    June 24th, 2010 at 12:43am
  • Lexi Wombat

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    wooooot super jimmy! :D aha love him ^-^ awesome chapter :{D (it has a moustache o.o)
    June 23rd, 2010 at 09:51pm
  • shleb

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    It just keeps getting better and better! I was wondering the same thing about where the guys came from, but it was still a great update!
    June 23rd, 2010 at 05:52am
  • wild rover

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    Yes, dear. That was certainly soon enough! It was an awesome surprise to see the update notification in my inbox! And you're quite welcome, I just like pointing out obvious things such as writing ability :P And I'm sorry about your dad. Although mine is around, I don't have the closest relationship I could have with him. So I can sort of imagine how that must be for you.

    Okay... great update :D I thought it was really cute. I'm willing to bet Jimbo's gonna make a pretty great dad, and if not, it'll be pretty entertaining to see how he messes up. As mean as that sounds xD I also thought it was amazingly sweet how he scared those guys away (I'm also wondering where they came from. Will the next chapter have the same events but in Crystal's POV?) and he asked her for a hug! And she accepted! If it weren't 1 AM, I would have sqee'd out loud. So cute.

    Once again, I'm really looking forward to more!
    June 23rd, 2010 at 05:32am
  • wild rover

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    I would like to add that this is very well written considering your age. You've got the chops, kid, 'cause you don't wanna see the crap I was writing when I was your age xD
    June 22nd, 2010 at 11:27pm
  • Gingerbread Nan

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    I lovers this story berry much...it makes my day..and rains on my parade (thats a good thing..i love the rain) and I love Days of old its a really good fan fictions...lol XD more more more, I shall start a chant...lol no I won't I know some writers get annoyed with that..update soon
    June 22nd, 2010 at 10:48pm
  • wild rover

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    Shucks! I think I love you, you know that! Thanks for the shout-out. I think I may do something of the like ;)

    Now, onto the subject at hand! I loved this chapter :D It was great. Crystal (my eldest sister's name is Crystal, so I can relate to her a little more by that, too xD) is still a very believable character, and I still love that quite a bit. She's still scared. She doesn't know what Jimmy or anyone will think of her. I just can't wait to see how they both react when they meet each other!

    Geez, update soon please? :P
    June 22nd, 2010 at 10:21pm
  • Lexi Wombat

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    ahhhh i love this :D
    June 22nd, 2010 at 09:47pm
  • wild rover

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    Again, another great chapter! I really hope you update soon! And thankfully, Jimmy seems to be taking this all in stride. At least he's not in denial or some shit :P

    If I update WKTTWKU.... will you update this? LMAO.

    You know I love a story when I start bargaining in updates xD
    June 21st, 2010 at 10:24pm
  • wild rover

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    Whoa, how did I not find this earlier? Geez. As you already know, I love father/daughter fics, and I'm pretty sure this one is no exception. It's off to a great start, you took something that was done a lot but made it seem real, Crystal is scared out of her mind like anyone in her situation would be, not all rough and tough and 'I don't need you' and whatnot.

    Anyway, I hope you update this soon! I subscribed ;)
    June 9th, 2010 at 06:23pm