Honey, Hush Your Lips - Comments

zerousy (100)

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rotflmao! Adam was such a dick, but by god this story was hot.

April 8th, 2013 at 10:44am

han jisung xx (100)

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I loved this. I hate Adam for this but it was great. :)

December 28th, 2011 at 02:34am

lyndsifer. (105)

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You and your infamous sex scenes.
xDDDD.
I really liked this[:
Adam is a dick though!
Cumming in some girl then telling her to gtfo?!
Wtf?!
Sounds like a playah to meee[[[:
I love you<3

August 21st, 2010 at 07:06am

D. Dixon (100)

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Hot damnnn! Ha, a sequel would be like amazing with this. ^_^ But yeah, why can't every Three Days Grace concert end like that? *le sigh* XD Loved ittt! :D Great job, hun!

August 21st, 2010 at 07:01am

Lovely.Parasite. (150)

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“Wait, wait, wait; fiancée? You have a fiancée?”
“Yea.”
AHAHAHA! XD I love it! Adam was an ass, but that was so hot! :)

August 11th, 2010 at 09:46am

k i w i (100)

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uhm, can we say raunchy? XD that was really good and the end, like she said: what. the. fuck. wow it was good.

July 28th, 2010 at 06:28am

fawndling (100)

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^Damn, my bb code didn't come out right either.

Hahaha. Oh well.

June 29th, 2010 at 11:29am

fawndling (100)

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^Well, she posted 3,000 times. That was a hassle to scroll through. Hahaha.

Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed your entry. It was sexy and surprising and original and very well-written.

"I threw my hands up in the air and screamed out my emotions of excitement and complete and utter derailment." I loved your use of the word derailment. It's perfect for this description.

"Even though she annoys the hell out of me all the time, and is such a fucking dunce it’s unbelievable, there is truly no one else I would rather have this experience with." No comma is necessary after the word time. Also, I find it amusing how completely relatable this sentence is. I think we all have that one dumb, annoying friend who we love to death. However, it seems to me that Kat was the dumb one in the end.

"He did not just insinuate that he was going to kick me out after what happened between us." You should fix the bb code on this.

I really liked this, overall. It put a real twist on the cliche "I fucked a rock star and he fell in love with me" spittle that I usually come across. This was way more realistic. This actually happens. Not to mention, the sex scene was really steamy and well written. Thank god. Reading badly written sex scenes is just embarrassing. Anyway, very great job. Thanks for entering this in my contest. (:

June 29th, 2010 at 11:28am