He's the Bad Boy. He's the Police Chief's Son. And They Both Like Me. - Comments

its amazing

OMG okay
I'm sad it ended...
but then again;
I'm happy you
have another story
that most definitely
caught my interest.
:D
so...
I'm gonna go check
it out. o:
I <3 this story.[;

didn't expect that

yay ! update :D can't wait for another chapter !

loved it

Damn you Cheif!

YAY!
she went to the police.
Now the chief just
has to believe her.
I say they set up a
camera. XD
catch the dirty bastard
in the act.
O:

update soon ?!

Gah ;
I hate her dad.
:/

I lovees this story.
Hopefully she does go tot he cops.
More soon???

ooo she goin to his house cant wait to see whats next

wonder what the cops are going to say?
more soon?

I love it! I cant wait to see what happens with allie and ash! i think you should keep them together ;) they are really cute together. great job with the story, and keep on writing! you've got talent!! loves ya! <3

I love it! I cant wait to see what happens with allie and ash! i think you should keep them together ;) they are really cute together. great job with the story, and keep on writing! you've got talent!! loves ya! <3

oh keep asher in the plot i like him

no no no cliff hangers please update soon

more soon?
i need to know what happens next

Omigod!!!!! Allie is being beaten by her drunk father!!! You have one of the best stories i ever read, and it includes, mibba, quizilla and random books. AWSUM!!!! can't wait for the next update.

Thanks theplaidpuzzle for the comments. No I haven't gotten reported for grammatical errors on this story but I did on another one of my stories. It seems like people on here have nothing better to do than to snoop out errors in stories and report them. No offense to anyone. But yea, thanks for ccommenting! :) <3VampirePrincess15<3

hey i just wanted to say, i love this story! i subscribed!! =) also, i have a question. did you get reported for grammatical errors in your story? i know that's REALLY nosy, but i did on my story, and i was wondering if it was a common thing, or if it was just me, cuz i thought i had no errors in my story, but people keep telling me i do, and i don't see them. Anyway, I'm rambling. And i looooove this story. update soon?

whoa <3