I really like this one, it's rather diffrent than the other "OMG M SHADOWZ IS MAH DAD!? *faints*" And to be honest, I like this version better. I hope you update soon cuz I can't wait to read the rest of this!
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol. really great job though! that was sp effing funny! "I do?" Jimmy was like , 'short bitch say what'? lol