We're Not Falling In Love, We're Just Falling Apart - Comments

I did not see that coming. Pepper had Nate's kid! But then again i'm not shocked. So whose the baby with now? And it has to be about three now i guess. Oh i can't wait until Nate finds out. That is gonna be interesting. And also looks like Queen Pep is on the war path.

Also looks like Little E is now in a love triangle. That's gonna be interesting. Can't wait to read more. Update soon! :D

Chapter 9: People are always staring. They stare. They’re kind of jerks like that. Psh, I feel like the time spent between girlfriends doesn’t apply to these boys. And vice versa for the girls. They’d mate with everyone if they could. Psh, see how fast Dan is working? It feels like he’s known her for all of two minutes. Crazy boys, crazy girls. Tsk, tsk. Mmm fries and burgers, you’re making me hungry, man. Om nom nom for the win. Twenty one questions? Aha, my friend and I were playing twenty questions yesterday. It would seem the count changes for Americans xD Mail me a milkshake, will ya? No, the cherry stem does not mean you are a good kisser, it means you are a good something else. Think about it. Mhmm. Woo making out in a restaurant! I hate when people do that. It makes me want to dump their drinks on their heads. It slays me that they call each other by letters. They’re too unintelligent to continue the name, apparently.

Finally a good Gossip Girl story..though I haven't checked them all out yet..but this one just started and is still going! Woo, damn it has a lot of surprise's and I love Pepper and Little E. I thought I was going to like Pepper better, when I had read the first chapter, but nope, I think I like E better..myabe its a little because I don't really like Nate, and I have a big thing for Chuck Bass and Dan would def be my second choice! Haha! Lucky E gets both! Seems like she's going more for E, but you never know, things could change right? Haha, anyway, wooo!

That kiss kind of made my day :). Dan is so much nicer than Chuck can even dream of being.
And I'm proud of 'Little E' standing up for herself like that, even if that means the queen bee of Constance hates her for it. I wonder what voicemail Pepper left though.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
xox

Chapter 8: Three years will age anyone. Unless they’re that chick, you know the chick, Joan Rivers I think? Yeah sure, that one. So much botox, so little face. But then again, this is a building. It’d still age and need some botox. I wish money would buy me an A in math right now. I feel like these people are really dumb to be so obsessed about this gossip site. It’s like a mini-PerezHilton only no one cares. Even so, people barely care about that one. Total fail. Hahaha boys belong to people. I wish. Then I could stake a claim on Tom Welling and my life would be complete. Everyone keeps calling each other bitches. For a school that has so many AP classes, they really need to expand on their vocabulary. I feel like Pepper has an anger management problem and she’s how you release your anger since you can’t do it in the real world ahahaha. Angry JacJac. A convent? Like the Jon Walker nunnery? Tsk tsk so much cursing. That’s a barrier to effective communication, you know. Ahhh of course she was pregnant. Of course.

I didn't expect a baby to be the reason Pepper left Manhattan. And now I clearly remember why I've always hated Chuck. He's such a slimey, digusting douchebag!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
xox

^^ I agree on the dialogue thing Bethany mentioned :).
Apart from that, I really liked this chapter. Why the hell is Chuck acting like Eve belongs to him? He should just let her go. If she'd rather spend time with Dan, I can't see why anyone wouldn't want her to do so.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
xox

too tired and sore to comment properly. ahaha humphrey is the worst last name ever. can i make a suggestion? it'd be easier to read if you gave each person's dialogue a new paragraph or line like jac does. sometimes it gets a little jumbled and i have to reread to figure out who is talking. loafers <3

Chapter 6: Maybe if they weren't such stupid slutty people they wouldn't have to worry about the GG. Just throwing it out there. Oh, my life is so dramatic, I go around kissing random people and have lots of money, wa wa wa. Dude, I'm so eating spinach and cheese pasta right now. The only people that get caught in knee length wool tartan are Scottish men in kilts. See? See, if you show your bra then obviously you're gonna be on some dumb gossip site. Tsk, tsk, tsk. Ew, seriously? Put your apple in the compost. It's like when Mother forgot about the banana peel in the bathroom and then Father got super pissed cause he hates bananas. I just laughed.

Oh wow, someone arriving at Contance on foot? I can imagine that's unheard of, pretty much every girl that goes there has her own personal driver or something, haha.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
xox

I love GG, however, I do need to read the books...Can't wait for the next chapter!

I have never gotten into the whole gossip girl thing but this story definately makes me wonder what i have been missing haha! cant wait for the new chapter!

Chapter 4: So, uhm, yeah, Chace Crawford can take a vacation in my pants. Penn Badgley can too, but not for as long. Ed whatshisface cannot. I've decided he is unattractive in that nasty, hairy R-Patz sort of way. There's always a Nate, isn't there? I hope he gets kicked in the nads. OH MY LORD YOU NEED TO READ THIS BOOK, JAC. I forgot to tell you. Wideacre by Philippa Gregory. So effing messed up it's amazing. Hahahha wtf Chuck is such a dick. For a second I though it said to Pepper and Elvis. OH SHYT NO. Going somewhere to talk is never a good idea. Crap, I need to make you a guidebook to life or something. See, see then he goes and kiss her and bad shit will happen. Fail. Giant, sloppy fail. Good God, someone needs to take that stick out of Nate's butt. Of course you love me xD

Chapter 5: Dude, I'm always out of the loop. I always found it funny that they call it a flute of champagne. That just makes me think of the instrument flute leaking booze. Damn these Manhattan boys work fast. I feel like they're all one pretty girl away from date raping everyone. The interesting positions are always the best positions. These little Spotted things are still distressing me to no extent. Wtf why is she bailing? So confused xD Though Chuck is a douche. And Dan sounds cute enough. I love running away with questionable strangers.

You know, I have always thought Dan was the nicest, most real guy out of all the GG boys. I've always liked him best, so it's a good thing Eve ran into him :). And Chuck as always been my least favourite, so I like the fact that Eve's blowing him off, lol.
And Jac, next time you say your lay-outs are rubbish, don't change your story lay-out to something like this. It looks really good if you ask me :).
Looking forward to the next chapter.
xox

Those were two interesting chapters. Before each newly introduced character's name was said, I allready guessed who they were, which makes me feel good, since I really remember most of them by now :).
I want to know what happened between Pepper and Nate in the past!
Jac, you know I love you too!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
xox

Let's do this cracked-out comment by chapters, shall we?

Chapter 1: You know who wants to go to an all girls private schools? No one, that's who. Ahh, Pepper. I would sneeze around her constantly just to piss her off. This is the only girl that would not be ecstatic to move to Manhattan. Like actually, for serious. "If I had to suffer, I was going to look hot while suffering." Aha, damn straight.

Chapter 2: It's distressing to say Ed what'shisface's disturbed face every time I go to a new chapter. He really needs to untuck his shirt. Or better yet, just take it off. They all should. I'll tell you who the eff you are, YOU'RE MY COUGAR <3 Wellington-Westford? Ahaha if that doesn't scream hoighty toighty, I don't know what does. Dude, I think I'll marry someone named Giovanni. And then just say his name about a million times. How do you even fit three walk in closets in one room? This baffles me.

Chapter 3: Hahaha but we love insanity! WHAT I AM SO CONFUSED BY THIS SPOTTED THING. Jac my dear, explain later before I eat your brains. I think I need to jump a boy wearing a purple suit. Because I mean come on, purple. Ahahahahhahahahah I just about died. Way to introduce yourself, Chuck boy. He's such a fail James Bond. I love how all these names are completely irrelevant to me =D

love love love, m'dears <3333

This is GG as I remember it. The more alcohol involved, the better everything gets :). And of course, the Louboutins and Jimmy Choos, haha.
Looking forward to the dinner thingy.
xox

I love GG. It's been a while since I read the books though and I've never seen the series, so I'll have to get used to the names once again. But I'm sure I'll love this story loads!
Looking forward to getting to know Pepper :).
xox