I have to say that this is one of the best stories I have have every read. I'm a huge fan of Poe and his work and I loved the Tell tale heart. Your langague was very Poe like
As a continuation of Poe, this was very well written and it was pretty creepy and demented if I might add. The grammar was very fluent and it was extremely well written (: :appalud:
In comparison to the original Tell Tale Heart, I think you did an amazing part. You were able to catch onto his theory that he was sane. You used the right language, and it was amazing. I fucking love Poe, and now I fucking love you. :D
This is an interesting continuum to the original story by Poe. From where you picked up is fitting since the readers of the original famous tale didn't give much thought to the destiny of the character in the end.
I found it slightly intriguing how the old man's heart-beat kept haunting him thus it wasn't dead to him. The heart was still alive
By the way, I noticed you used '&' and that really isn't a valid thing throughtout writing a story since it's considered chatspeak me thinks. :tehe: Though it was slightly confusing, good job