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  • Bluecaty15

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    i love it, please update again very soon!!
    February 26th, 2012 at 04:13am
  • Trig-ger

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    its amazing
    July 1st, 2011 at 03:39am
  • minidiva12

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    love the story..... keep it up!
    November 24th, 2010 at 06:12am
  • totalli_okie

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    pretty good story line... keep up the good work there
    November 3rd, 2010 at 01:08am
  • Fire and Ash.

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    Oh my god!, you have to update now please!!! ???

    >..<
    >..<
    >..<
    >..<
    August 25th, 2010 at 05:49pm
  • solita

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    Awwwh, we love you, too!
    I can't wait for the next update.
    And I am so glad to see them back togetheer.
    :3
    August 4th, 2010 at 06:38am
  • alimo1

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    This looks to be a pretty good story. There two things I would advise and I don't mean to sound 'bitchy' but it gets kind of annoying to see one thing repeatedly with new and semi-new authors.
    One thing I would advise: making a new paragraph when people are talking. It's one of the things I see A LOT with new and semi-new writers. When you read a novel (either a paperback/hardcover, one online or even some of the seasoned members here on mibba) they all have seperate paragraphs to differentiate who's talking. It looks nice AND it's easy to tell who's talking. I know the easy way out is just to have one jumbled paragraph but in the long run, new paragraphs are your friend.
    Second: delete the first 'chapter.' please. Eventually, if you haven't already, you will be reported for that as well. The reasoning: it's an author's note and not really considered a chapter. An easy way to post a reason-why-everything-got-deleted is in the summary or in a journal/blog on here or elsewhere that you can post a link to in the summary.
    August 1st, 2010 at 07:21pm
  • shadowhorses

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    thnks!!!!! rly means alot!
    August 1st, 2010 at 06:18pm
  • solita

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    I am seriusly in love with this story!
    :)
    I really hope you get a chance to update again soon.
    :)
    August 1st, 2010 at 12:40pm
  • JennyQ96

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    update soon ?
    July 7th, 2010 at 05:31am
  • JennyQ96

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    i really like it !!!
    July 7th, 2010 at 05:31am
  • shadowhorses

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    thanks! <3
    July 5th, 2010 at 10:19pm
  • Krissy-Ann

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    THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 5th, 2010 at 06:03am
  • shadowhorses

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    yea!!! swry about that!!!! i totally forgot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 27th, 2010 at 11:38pm
  • Fire and Ash.

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    Can You Please Make The Chapters Longer?
    June 27th, 2010 at 07:19am
  • shadowhorses

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    thnx! ill b updating soon!
    June 27th, 2010 at 12:55am
  • Fire and Ash.

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    Hey, I Like Your story a lot,
    But, could you make the chapters Longer,
    Because they are awfully Short.
    June 26th, 2010 at 08:25pm
  • shadowhorses

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    okay, thank you
    June 16th, 2010 at 07:48pm
  • indiedoll

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    I won't even comment on your grammar but why is the classified as original fiction? Please correctly label it as fanfic.
    June 15th, 2010 at 09:48pm
  • real_life_bella_swan

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    its good plzz update soon
    June 15th, 2010 at 04:01am
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