Cemetery - Comments

I was reading the prompt and really thinking what would come to one's mind... This was so-far-and-over my thoughts, I loved it! The story is so creative, I love daydreaming stories, I'm just story his life is not the best of lifes...
And of course, aside from the spelling mistakes, this is so easy to understand. Beautiful

Wow, I loved this! It was so creative. Greeaaat job!

Wow! That was amazing. I can't believe how you took that prompt and turned it into that. I tip my hat to thee sir.

Even the slightest touch of my baggy gray T-Shirt is to much/i] too much.
know the imigaries want me to see, but imageries.
bathroom,her arm stretches out bathroom, her
groan inwardly(I hate loosing inwardly (I hate losing)
She is a beautiful women, long black woman
who the grave was dug for? for.

Aside from that I believe that this would be more visually attractive if you used a better background.

But good job otherwise.
Thanks for using my prompt!