She Wore an Indigo Shirt - Comments

This was sooo good! I loved it and like most Staal stories Jordan was my favorite!!!

This was really adorable, and I am now going to go read your story that this is based off. I really enjoy your writing style :D

This was absolutely gorgeous and hilarious and I don't know why no one else has commented on this.
I laughed way too much for my own good while reading this.
"Hung like a horse." - brilliant!
"If you let me have a popsicle now, I’ll work your popsicles when we go home." - amanzing!
"And then the next morning she woke up pregnant." - too good!
"Come on, my sensual lover..." - magnificent!
I wish there were more Marc stories that were great like this because there's only like 3 others that I actually really enjoy.