This is intriguing. I want to know what's going on. A little constructive criticism - maybe you could join some of the chapters together if you're bothered about them being short. I can see that some of them could run well as a whole. Otherwise I look forward to future instalments.
That's what i was thinking, but i'm going to put Grace's dream in. The beginning of that is how the whole story started! Plus i'm going to need it for the next chapter i think....