The Square Root - Comments

  • vmusicforlove

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    Hey! I'm not sure if you know.. But I'm rewriting this story on wattpad! If you'd like to follow it ;)
    May 17th, 2015 at 05:40pm
  • ImJustLaya

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    yeah.. you know I'm a huge fan, so uh... it should be no surprise that this is my 3rd time rereading this story...
    April 29th, 2014 at 10:34pm
  • Love The Sea

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    This story is SOOOO awesome! I only got to the 4th chapter, but I am so excited to read more! The sequel looks great, too. :)
    June 16th, 2013 at 05:45pm
  • E P Kent

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    Comment Swap: I dont usually read past the first few paragraphs with this kind of story, but i actually found myself reading down to the end of the chapter. You have a great flow in your writing; nothing feels forced or awkward - this is usually a sign of refined editing and hard work, so good work. You have clearly put a lot of work into this story and it shows.
    November 19th, 2012 at 07:41pm
  • NinthLife

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    Comment Swap~
    OK. First of all I am very excited about reading the rest of this. I've only read the first chappie, but WOOOOAAAAAAH. It's amazing. I'm reading the rest as soon as I have time. It first hooked me when I realized she was British. British people are awesome. c:
    I really like her brother so far.
    Great job~
    Keep on writing ! c:
    August 26th, 2012 at 04:46pm
  • discoveringclouds

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    I found your story. Then I read it all night. Now its 8:30 and I'm very sleepy. I'm also very happy with finishing the story, on both our parts. If you didn't finish by the time I found it, I don't know where I would be.

    By the way the Square Root of Love is Love. Bada-bing.

    Good luck writing. I think at some point I thought I was dreaming some of the adorable things in this story.

    I know you want to move to less characters in the future as well, that would really help. Also, fewer other boy friends and girl friends getting in the way conveniently would be nice too.

    Write on!
    August 2nd, 2012 at 02:34pm
  • MusicLover525

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    Aww!! I find this story so cute! :) It took them awhile to get to each other but I think in the end it was all worth it! :)
    August 1st, 2012 at 05:35pm
  • fearless-forever

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    So beautiful and awesome!!!! You are maniacal, I have to get up for school at 5:30 and it is 4 right now and I just finished you fantastic story and I want to check out the sequel. Ugh, another sleepless night lol. Just hope I don't pass out in choir. You rock and are awesome. Peace out!
    February 6th, 2012 at 11:11am
  • PhoebenPaige

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    Awwww!! I loved it!! :D
    January 17th, 2012 at 01:32am
  • Dani_Girl

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    Perfection. Can't wait for the sequel even though I've already read it.
    January 15th, 2012 at 07:18pm
  • moonlightkiss

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    Can't wait for the sequel!!!!! :]
    January 15th, 2012 at 04:39pm
  • Arizona.Beauty.

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    That had to be the most cutest chapter you've written! ^_^ Please update asap if there is another chapter after this, if not so looking forward to the sequal! <3
    January 15th, 2012 at 01:36pm
  • justrealizelife

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    Can't wait for the sequel =]
    You're a great writer <3
    January 15th, 2012 at 09:44am
  • justrealizelife

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    So...I've read that last chapter about 5 times now. It's distracting me from my homework
    update soon :)
    January 13th, 2012 at 09:45am
  • PhoebenPaige

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    *squeals* loved it!! :D ty for the update!
    January 13th, 2012 at 03:22am
  • CandyLover

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    Awwwww:') That was a REALLY amazing chapter:D
    January 13th, 2012 at 12:06am
  • young'lovee

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    This update was amazing
    I Shedded a few tears
    This was so romantic
    January 12th, 2012 at 10:53pm
  • Arizona.Beauty.

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    nbrkgvnjijntkrcmob OH MY GOD. THAT WAS BEYOND AMAZING! FINALLY. Eeeeek! :'D I loved this chapter! & to answer your question, it totally depends on what got me pissed in the first time, if someones have a dig, i'll ask them kindly to shut the fudge up, if not a cursing fit :') I normally just bite my tongue though, else i'd get into a lot of trouble... :L <3
    January 12th, 2012 at 10:42pm
  • mkhlaxgrl13

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    YESSS!
    January 12th, 2012 at 09:49pm
  • mandies

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    OMG!!! this is so fucking adorable!!!! i cant wait to see what the tatts are!!!
    January 12th, 2012 at 04:18pm