November 29th, 2010 at 01:29am
Cute story!
All I can say is that there are some minor grammatical/capitalization errors. Just run it through a spellcheck with word or a beta and it'll be great.
Awesome story, again. Poor Axl. :(
WHY WHY WHY?!
It angers me. >:[ Dammit, Axl! Get your head outta your ass! Fuck all.
But still, nevertheless, it's spectacularly written. It pisses me off a good bit, but I s'pose that's a good thing in your case. :D Good work!
...I still think they should've ended up together, though.