I Have To Fix This... - Comments

by the way, congrats on second place

thank you for entering my contest, i greatly enjoyed your story.
i think that the way you ended it was just adorable.
some extra description was needed in parts, but other wise, it was how you had phrased it overall that had caught my attention. i found your writing to be amazing and it touched a really true meaning, that even in the darkest of times if you really love someone...you can turn their life around for the better

Are you serious!?
NO OTHER COMMENTS?
That's ludicrous.
This is written fantastically,
and the ending was incredibly adorable.
I loved this so much<3
Good luck in the contest,
I think you should win. ;D

Awh, this is really sweet(:
I'd like to see more of it. :D
<3