I always lol so hard when either one of us use the: "Can't get it up cause he's too drunk"-joke. xD
GAH IT'S SYN! ana, you need to ru and fast. I wonder do the boys of HU feel any remorse, like... what if they start developing real protective feelings towards Ana? that would make it harder for Matt and Syn to get even with her. Ugh, I hope that happens. I wish there's some good in George & Co. here's for hoping... although, it's probably all in vain. :<
gah, Jorel and his deep brown eyes, you're teasing me aren't you! and then long-haired syn with fedora, you're so naughty! -_-*
can't seriously wait for more, I love this story so much. heck, I love you! :D <3 Nuuba The Great.
I love the sequel..it is clear that matt still has feeling for ana but i wonder is brian still has feelings for her still. I cant believe her calling matt's son a brat or giving her daughter up to continue partying..she deserve this. Love the update cant wait for the next one.
Thank you very much, sis...although she died (and I did think it was well justified in a way) it was hot as hell. Shit, I think the action was even hotter as he killed her as he got off. Yep, yep, yep...much needed and worth the wait.
As to being random, I don't think it was...it proved that he still does have it in him (as he said so to himself) and it shows Brian that he still has it in him even though it may not seem that it comes across that way. Cant have Brian thinking he's a creampuff now.
What the hell is Brian going to shadow her for? Well, I can actually see why...but I just hope it works out in their favor.
I have to say this is my absolute favorite story on mibba. I am sooo glad you're back and updating. Your writing is really excellent. Cant wait for the next chapter.
In my opinion, that matt the hulk action was not random at all… And as heartless as it sounds, for once I feel like Matt’s aggression was well-justified. Of course killing her was a bit of extreme, but that’s the spirit of this story.
And yeah, I might as well confess it, there’s no need to try to fake it… I DID ENJOY MATT AND HIS SEXY-TIME VERY MUCH. ugh… there, don’t make me repeat that, alright?
I can’t wait to find out how exactly Syn is going to spook poor Ana out! Also, if she even considers of being interested in George, I’m gonna slap her back to her senses… and what the hell, EVERY MALE CHARACTER IN THIS STORY WANTS TO BONE HER, GOD DAMMNIT. I’M JEALOUS. haha..
yaa, I really need to re-locate the leather whip that I used when we were writing Suspicious Minds, cause I can’t deal with waiting for another decade for the next update! I want it now!!!! *cries*
And I still hate Jorel. He’s a double-faced douche.
With love your most dedicated and loyal fan, Nuuba
Wow that Matt smut was really was interesting..... he must have a lot of frustration built up in him. I am glad that he killed that whore because she is one heartless woman, giving up her child for a sorry ass excuse. Matt still cares for Ana doesn't he? He just won't admit it won't he. I wonder if Matt knows about Brian's plan, about spooking Ana and letting the others become close friends to her so she can less paranoid about Matt and the gangs plan. Those are really getting close to Ana and now I bet they don't really want her to get hurt. So what will happen to Ana's current boyfriend after she is back in the Matt's clutches. UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
And this is how it's done! I'm loving the Matt action. At the little preview on fb, I actually thought it was Ana he was speaking to but I should have known better. You just love building up the tension and anticipation and I'm absolutely loving it! Also the intricate plans you've made and the fact that Ana has no clue about anything, it's just great.
I'm curious though, about how Matt will react when he had Ana back. Will he really break every bone in her body? I mean when you consider that she is the mother of his child and he really does love her...I don't know. But then again, she hurt him bad and he always has those random bursts of aggression...
Well, either way, Matt Tuck doesn't seem willing to let her go anytime soon and Jay might actually have started to care for her. Also I can't tell if Brian still wants her or not, I would think he's learned his lesson, but it's Syn we're talking about, after all. I see more complications coming up and I can't wait for more! I'm really excited for the development in this story!
So sorry for not reading sooner! I have been busy for while, lot drama happening in my family and finance too. Well at least I was able to read your resent chapter. Man Matt is really hell bent on getting Ana back. I feel scared for what he will do to her when he gets her back. But Matty is so adorable! He catches on easily too. he is going to be one smart kid! So she is going to go on tour with them, I wonder what Matt and Brian say when the find out her answer. Well I can't wait for the next update and hope it'll be soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
Gah... I Lolled(I am aware that I just made a p.t. from that word...) when you mentioned Syn's fling with Nuuba! I didn't expect that to be brought up, but the way you brought it up, the whole conversation had a whole lot more meaning. LIke tasha above me mentioned about the trust-issues between Shadows (so weird to call him that... but there's so many Matt's in this story already; it confuses me, haha!). And yes, there's still definitely something shady between those two.
Of course, because a major part of this story, besides love and lust is about thow two rivaling gansters. At least, I see it that way.
Ana... I WANNA SLAP HER!!!! DON'T FALL FOR THEIR TRAPS, JUST STAY AWAY FROM THEM AND LIVE YOUR LIFE WITH MATT THE TUCK. ahahaha... Have I mentioned by the way how much I adore Padge? :] Now I have.. Anywayz, then again I know she'll never find peace with herself for leaving her child behind. she's that kind of a person who cannot get past that kind of a trauma, she's so emotional person...
Oh and why do I want to punch something or cause pain everytime you mention Jorel and his 'cute' babyfac? >:O Why it has to be him? he's so sleazy and I can't believe Ana's falling for her stupid blabbering. He's not even funny. not at all. :'''D hahah...
njaaah. that's about all from me. I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE. WRITE IT SOON, WOMAN. ;]
Oh dear...she's going to be the proverbial lamb being led to the slaughter...I don't know how I feel about that. Jay...Jay I don't completely trust...he can be bad as long as Matt gets all pissed and sweaty and then takes his ass out. I just love an angry Matthew.
I feel a lot of different things about this...the way Brian based the whole "trust" issue off how Matt answered about Nuuba...really...that's, I don't know...can't put my finger on it. There's still some tension there that's all going to be there, I can tell that, I just don't see it all hunky-dory off that ONE answer even if Matt was honest.
And, yes, little pitchers have big ears and Matty can't take after Matt all the way...Ana has to be lurking in the boy somewhere--that's already been proved by his 'eavesdropping' skills. lol
This is interesting...I do believe once they hit the States it'll be more so...and I hope like hell Matt leaves little clues that he's onto her just to make her freak out...lol I'm sadistic, though. I just can't believe that she's going to actually go back when she knows deep inside that it can't go all smooth sailing.
Amazing update :D