Bleed For Me - Comments

  • NaiveDove

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    I love this, not beacause the gore, but because this is real, you dont make the killer kill because mommy didnt love her or cause daddy snuck into her room at night, you made her kill just cause, which is the reason most phycopaths do it, thnk u for pushin the envelope.
    June 19th, 2010 at 11:47pm
  • so sedated.

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    I like this. A lot actually. It is quite good and I loved the detail and graphic - it made it intense and really good. And love how the killer kind of has a planned killing schedule it made it written well and basically I really liked it with the detailing, the darkness, the graphic description. It was good.

    Amazing job and good luck! :D
    June 1st, 2010 at 10:21am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    That was pretty graphic, which is awesome.
    I like how you explained what made her (or him, can't remember) start killing in the first place. That's good, because it's in detail and not just jumped.
    I liked the last bit, how it said just another victim like every weekend. How it's planned and scheduled, kinda.
    I really liked that, with the detail and everything!
    Well done!
    May 17th, 2010 at 06:41pm
  • SuperBat69

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    Damn that was extremely good!!! *claps* Very graphic, I love it!
    May 16th, 2010 at 11:37pm
  • KeepFaithInTheWorld

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    omg... that's really creepy... but also pretty cool lol

    keep writing :D
    May 16th, 2010 at 11:07pm