This Is An S.O.S. - Comments

okay, i read the other part :D but travis -growl- i'm kinda frustrated with him, this is exactly how the guys i like act. stupid boys.

hehe "going to science class like you!" XDXDXD your already back at school :P:P:P:P then again, different school systems as well as countries :/

it's kinda confusing.
I don't know what court is.
I haven't a clue what the main character looks like (or any other character).
that's about it.
Few grammar errors. Good job.

i like it... idk im bad at describing things. it's really good. but it's a tad confusing. i like how most of it's short and to the point though. if it could be a little more clear and detailed (?) then i think you could totally send it in to be published or something.
well, im assuming something big might happen soon. so um... hokay im done :]

woah, she sings hannah montana songs?!?!?!?!?! scary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!