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  • Vivid Dreams

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    This is amazing

    You did such an great job of weaving the details through so that the reader can paint a very clear picture of what's going on.
    August 3rd, 2010 at 07:59pm
  • ilovetoast

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    Mmmmkay, I just subscribed.
    I love this so far! I've always been a fan of any story that this much detail in it.
    I care about present time in stories as much as the past.
    I think this is an awesome start!

    More soon, please :)
    May 20th, 2010 at 10:54am
  • purplemonster

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    (: this is really detailed, and I love it! I wonder what happened to her, hmm. A broken heart?
    Ahh anyways, : / if its not too much to ask ( I don't wanna be mean or anything) could you change the text to a bit of a bigger size? Its kinda hard to read. I don't mean to be rude. : /

    Update Soon! [:
    May 20th, 2010 at 05:58am
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