Anticipation - Comments

That actually gave me goosebumps. It reminded me of my shows, down to every detail - it was like I was there again. I loved that last line, about his eyes finding you. That's a gorgeous thought, it made me wonder whether Billie ever saw me, too.
You know I'm going to refer back to this story everytime I feel as though I need to be reminded of my shows, to remind me how lucky I am. It's beautiful.

That was so great! Really, it almost made me tear up reading it and thinking about the two concerts I'm going to see them in this summer. I love how you described everything, and the last sentence ("As he scanned over the thousands of eager faces in the crowd, I hope that for at least one moment, his emerald eyes found me.") was brilliant. Although many sentences were brilliant lol, but that one stuck in my memory. Probably because it was the last one.
Okay, I'm rambling. My point is, that it was awesome. You are really great at writing :)