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I've got you right where I want you!November 5th, 2010 at 01:49am
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Sooo i'm on chapter two... I wonder who Claire and Emily are.. ;)November 5th, 2010 at 12:37am
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THAT WAS AMAZING. :DSeptember 16th, 2010 at 11:02pm
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love the ending :DSeptember 12th, 2010 at 10:56am
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I've only read the first few chapters of this and I like the story line
but it some of it seems a bit over played to me, you are using either much to perfect rehearsed lines so it seems less realistic or slipping in small cleiches with your phrasing
(hope that wasn't to critical-just a suggestion)
I'm going to go read the rest nowSeptember 11th, 2010 at 12:31am -
i love this alot alot.
<33September 4th, 2010 at 09:44pm -
awwww love it :DSeptember 4th, 2010 at 11:43am
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i think that you should definably write a Jack story, i would be a companion novel, and also you wouldnt even have to write two more chapters the ending on chapter 33 is really good, but if you were to end it with a happy ending then blake should come up pregnant, well those are just my thoughts... great jobSeptember 4th, 2010 at 07:14am
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I really enjoyed this chapter! I can't wait for the sequel. My opinion about the Jack story is that you should write it. There aren't many Jack stories out there and I would like to read one.September 2nd, 2010 at 05:45pm
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love the update :DSeptember 2nd, 2010 at 03:30pm
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ok so you should take it as a good sign that ive stayed up til four am to read and have to stop now so i can have some sleep before a busy day tomorrow the story is really good, and im enjoying it immensely.September 2nd, 2010 at 11:15am
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awh, just finished reading it. its adorable! :-)
update asap!August 21st, 2010 at 03:23pm -
this was super cute. it made me smile =]August 20th, 2010 at 11:28pm
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awwww :D that was sweet :D
love the update :DAugust 20th, 2010 at 10:16pm -
Please write a sequel! That was so cute btw :)August 14th, 2010 at 02:53am
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i like it and please write a sequelAugust 14th, 2010 at 02:50am
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yeay they are married :D
love the update :DAugust 13th, 2010 at 11:29pm -
love the update :D
there married! already! on stage! woah!August 11th, 2010 at 07:59am -
love this chapter keep up the good workAugust 10th, 2010 at 11:50pm
I'll be completely honest too:
When she almost didn't go on tour I felt like sick to my stomach like NOO GOO! haha.
I also love her and Alex together<3
See, I started to read the sequal and I realized I needed to read the prequal...hahah.
As of right now, I think she was a bit PMS-ey like always wanting to leave, and this whole Jack and Alex thing, but I love it, and I can't wait to finish to move onto the sequal where I can comment at a decent time and not 7 mnths later. :)