I loved it! One tiny thing is that I felt you jumped into mentioning the characters too quickly without describing them very much, but that's kinda how movies do it by just showing the characters until someone says their name and what-not. Good job and I'm excited for the rest :)
OMFG, I HAVEN'T EVEN STARTED READING, BUT I JUST HAD TO COMMENT! ... Kay. My rant is over. :) Come outta hiding, now. Annnywayssss, who doesn't love Freddyyyy?? But just don't let him kill my Adam... please? Pleaseeee?? Keep one of your readers happy!! :D xD I'll go read now. I think I'm breathing regularly, again.