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  • Gerardxisxmyxfantasy

    Gerardxisxmyxfantasy (100)

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    I did mean years xD That's a funny mistake! I always make the funniest mistakes xD
    May 16th, 2010 at 07:46am
  • stencil heart.

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    I like this, but there's one mistake I caught.
    "they'd been together for seven ears"
    I think you mean years. :)
    But it's damn good.
    May 16th, 2010 at 07:41am
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